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  1. OKAY GUYS AN SU THAT ISNT ACTUALLY ABOUT CAPSTONE

     

    ive decided @CoderDrag0n8 that it would be best to try to serialize my short story.

    So imma look at that. Still a good chance it won’t work out (things like age laws or smt).

    BUT

    i have hope

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    2. CoderDrag0n8

      CoderDrag0n8

      yeah

      i guess

      anyways

      YAY YIPPEE

      I WANT TO READ

    3. SpiritOfWrath

      SpiritOfWrath

      I’ll add you to the other thing

    4. CoderDrag0n8

      CoderDrag0n8

      oh yeah that

      ok

  2. {Await further instruction.} From what you could tell, the instruction was unique to the five of you. The others in the crowd were told that there was simply a minor delay. Finn frowned, and looked up to the sky.
  3. Finn frowns, but doesn’t speak. They turn to a busy street, the great majority of the people present higher class. There seems to be a confusion among them, and the STAP-L beeps. {You have arrived at the Rendezvous.} The term, with a strange emphasis, is unfamiliar to you. @Spark of Hope
  4. Guys I need to calm down

    its bad

    im very angry

    help

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    2. Usseewa

      Usseewa

      U talkin' to me?

    3. Through the Living Hope

      Through the Living Hope

      Yeah. Wrath’s posted about this teacher before. It’s… not a great situation and I think the teacher needs to be fired 

    4. SpiritOfWrath

      SpiritOfWrath

      Yeah

      its a mess

      and I’m not sure if changing teacher would help, bc then I would need to redo a good amount of things.

      But I think that if I continue with this teacher I’m a goner

  5. So like I said that AP Seminar might work?

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    grrr

    Itll only work if I change teachers, it’s so bad.

    so like

    I got an assignment back. I got a 50% on it.

    (beleaf it or not, that’s the highest grade out of the LAST 5 ASSIGNMENTS)

    The assignment was the opposition paragraph for my essay.

    I left a little note next to it, saying that I had shifted my thesis a bit because of where my research led me.

    and guess what guess what

    She gave me a 50% and left the following notes

    1) I used nonacademic language. She highlighted this, and it was a single word within my source. Which, might I add, was written by a someone who didn’t have English as their first (and most likely not second) language.

    2) I deviated from my thesis. Huh. SHOROAHDIRNLOWJTICINAMKWKWID. Waddaheck! The biggest thing here is that I didn’t mention a point at the beginning of my paragraph, and transitioned, I’d think, pretty dang well into the second point.
     

    In summary, if I went back in time and changed 4 words of my essay, I would have been fine.


     

    At this point, I would not be surprised at all if she were specifically grading me poorly.

    Like, she’s mad that I emailed her, mad that my mom went to guidance and forced her to meet with her, and so she’s screwing me over.

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    2. SpiritOfWrath

      SpiritOfWrath

      I also had a peer look over it before I turned it in

      all he pointed out were a few grammar things

      which I fixed

      The teacher herself looked over it yesterday, said… nothing?

    3. Usseewa

      Usseewa

      Bro that sucks

      She sounds like a bad teacher tbh

  6. Finn follows. The directions given them seemed slightly obtuse, but they seemed to follow in the general direction to the Peak.
  7. Stormlight 5 Ending Spoilers:

    Spoiler

    GUYS

    I FOUND A SONG FOR THE BLACKTHORN SPREN / VOIDBRINGER

    its Indestructible, by Disturbed

     

  8. Guys

    guys guys guys

     

    FINALLY

    seminar is starting to look up.

    *phew*

    It all depends on if my teacher accepts my makeup work, but if she doesn’t, then

    *I switch teachers because I think Guidance is on my side*

  9. GUYS YOU SHOULD GET A KETEK FROM @Kaladist The Ketek Writer

    He told me to tell my friends

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    2. SpiritOfWrath

      SpiritOfWrath

      Crimson storms rise.
      Ancient blood boils within,
      Burning hearts of men,
      Screaming for vengeance.
      Tears fall into shadows.
      Hate consumes the world,

      Spiritual Wrath; that of the Wrathful spirits

      World the consumers hate,
      Shadows into fall tears.
      Vengeance for screaming,
      Men of hearts burning,
      Within boiling blood,
      Anciently rising storms crimson.

      ill also put it in my about me

    3. Through The Living Ash

      Through The Living Ash

      Oooooo

      Can I get a ketek?

    4. Keteᛕ
  10. Finn hesitated and nodded. “I guess we got to go… are you all heading to the Peak?”
  11. An update buzzed from whatever they had STAP-L on. In Finn’s case, it was his watch. {The buses have been delayed. Please follow these instructions to reach your final destination.} Finn frowned. “That’s strange. The buses have never been late before.” @Kansas Stormcursed @Spark of Hope @IcedOutPenguin
  12. Patch was watching from a distance, careful not to be seen. It was obvious that… something that happened. And he wouldn’t trust his life to the hands of strangers, not when he had no idea where he was.
  13. Finn zoned out, staring at where the bus would be. @KaladinsSenseOfHumourSpren!!!!
  14. Guys I discovered today that I’m a closet swifty.

    Definitely, that really what I am.

    Completely, utterly, describes me.

    y’all should listen to

    Blank Space, covered by I Prevail

    Spoiler

    I told my carpool (who r OBSESSED with pop) that I had broadened my musical horizons and then I played that for them and it was really funny.

     

    1. Kansas Stormcursed

      Kansas Stormcursed

      I ain't a Swiftie, but I do enjoy her music

    2. SpiritOfWrath

      SpiritOfWrath

      (The cover there is a death metal cover.)

      (except it starts as pop so it’s very disconcerting)

  15. "...you dropped something."
  16. Finn shrugged again.
  17. Finn shrugged. "At least some acknowledgement, all I ask."
  18. Patch follows her, watching cautiously.
  19. Finn snorted. @Spark of Hope and @KaladinsSenseOfHumourSpren must reply before we continue.
  20. @IcedOutPenguin “Hello? Who’s there?”
  21. He hesitated. “Sometimes. Not all the time. I’m Finn.”
  22. Finn smiled at Zouhxi, and checked his watch again. “Ah. It’s been… it’s been a long day. I’m swinging by the Peak before returning to my apartment.”
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