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This is a fragment of another fanfic I'm working on. It is the introduction of a compelling character who will act as a detective against the main characters. Is 3600 wods long. All critisism is welcome. Obligator.pdf

I wonder if a seeker can do the same, lower their reach, in exchange of piercing near copper clouds. And i mean, really near copper clouds.

Imagine that you are a copper savant, is it possible to manipulate the size of the cloud and its density? I mean, clubs could make a cloud the size of a building. Could he perhaps reduce the size of his copper cloud, and make it cover only him, in exchange making it almost impenetrable for an inquisitor?

That sounds like something he would do, but it's strange to me that Kelsier didn't mention it to Vin, or that TLR never showed up .

Does anyone know how he behaved during those noble partys? The only time he is mentioned at a ball is when Docksons says that he won't be able to go because Lord Ruler saw him once. I don't remember him being at any balls after that. So what was he like? Did everyone have to greet him or something? Did he appear without noticing it? Vin was never warned about it and the nobles never talked about it. I remember Sanderson saying that the ruler ran his empire with money first in mind, and that only the obligors had any sense of religion. So he was sociable? Could you talk to him? Did he even care?

Part 2 is finished. The pdf has part 1 and 2. Here are some drawings of the main 3 protagonists Fragile as Haze, part 2.pdf.

Hmmm, that's a really tough choice, Wayne is pretty funny and I find Kelsier's gray morality interesting. I think I'll go with stick

Wait, In english wax is called a lawkeeper, rigth ? In spanish we got it as Sheriff, my bad.

"The new sheriff? Yes, I've heard of her, I've never seen her in action, no one has. She works during the night, but believe me, she is not silent at all, she behaves like one of those mistborn of yesteryear, some rumor that she is. Just pray that your head isn't worth the coins she would spend to get to you." (Maybe it's an era 1 spoiler) Body reference: https://twitter.com/theposearchives/status/1744170789400891393 Vin face reference: Ben McSweeney

Lupin the 3rd, Castle of cagliostro. Here is a Rough story board of a figth I wrote on my mistborn fanfic. Video sin título ‐ Hecho con Clipchamp - copia.mp4 And this is an Animation final exam that I had (I am not too pround of it) Dibujo 2 Final Con Fondo.m4v Here is also 2 pages of the beginning of the same fanfic that I wrote

Ok, are you ready? Pattern is evil. (I don't know if anyone has already made this theory, but here I go) From the beginning, I always felt something strange around Pattern, and during a discussion with a friend about Shallan´s oaths has sworn so far, I realized something. All of Shalan's truths, or at least the ones that Pattern accepts, are those that imply that she is evil or a bad person. As: "I killed my father" However, her father was a very dangerous person. "I killed my mother" but it was an accident "I killed testament" However, she didn't know what she was doing. Kill, kill, kill. Of course, this alone isn't much, as it can only be because those are the most important moments in Shallan's life, but this line of thought piqued my curiosity and I began rereading all of Patron's interactions with Shallan, and I discovered that at the beginning everything Pattern was saying things like "You will kill me, like the other one" or emphasizing that this is what Shallan is like. There is also something we must remember: in the world we are told that cryptids are considered evil or dangerous. We generally think this is nonsense because we know Pattern, who could he hurt? However, I can remember a question about how there have been some Dangerous Cryptics before https://wob.coppermind.net/events/498/#e15652 (That said, there have been some very intelligent and very dangerous Cryptics in the past, and spren have long memories. So the reputation is not entirely undeserved) There's also that Pattern has been close to Shalan (even when she killed her mother), even though Testament was the spren she had at the time https://wob.coppermind.net/events/221/#e7874

I love medialunas (Half-moons), its a kind of bagel over here.

I think the further we go trough the eras, the more we'll know what some powers actually do, since I see scientists saying things like "F-pewter doesn't store strength, it stores muscle density" or things like that. What I'm trying to say is that maybe, if you can store the effect of caffeine, maybe what F-bronze really does is store your heart rate, maybe the way your body rests or goes into action, and with That maybe you could be able to tap in a specific way to enter the "Zone", like, enter a state of super consciousness similar to what F-zinc could do.

Feruchemy, the most spectacular choreographies I imagined are with it. Allomancy close second.

Wow, I don't know how I managed to miss this board. It was literally on the cover. Anyway, I'm Ian, I've been a Sanderson fan since 2021. And I've already read almost everything (except Edgedancer and Withe Sand). I'm from Argentina and English is not my first language (normally I would use this as an excuse for any typos you may find in my messages, but I actually just write very fast and sometimes I forget to revise the text) I'm studying animation, so I hope to one day work on an animated cosmere project. Sadly, I don't have anything I'm proud of in my portfolio.

Hello again, this time I bring you the first part of the fanfic. I plan to publish it in full once it's finished, but would appreciate feedback on the prose. In Spanish, I imitated Sanderson's type of writing, however, when it comes to translation, I can see how adaptation can have some problems. I used Google Doocks Auto Translate and spent half the month fixing what I noticed was wrong, but I still have some questions. In Spanish we usually try to avoid repeating words, especially pronouns. As we have words that refer to the person themselves, such as: "He carried his leather backpack, a wooden plate on his chest, his purse and a dueling staff that he hid behind the tentacles of his cloak." in Spanish it is "Llevaba su mochila de cuero, una placa de madera en el pecho, su monedero y un bastón de duelo que ocultaba detrás de los tentáculos de su capa" And I was wondering if the extra pronouns were normal, or just me not knowing how to adapt the text correctly. Also, the protagonist name, Calima, is synonymous with a specific type of fog, which unfortunately has no English version, and I was wondering if it would be better to leave it that way, or call it mist, fog, or haze. This and other suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Fragile as haze, part one.pdf

This is a Fanfic that I worked on during all of 2023 as a writing exersice My goal was to try my hand at creating characters, and character arcs for them, being in an original story. For that, I took scadrial, the planet where Mistborn takes place, and decided to create a story in a almost fictitional remote city (If you know the final empire map, you may be able to see were the story takes place at). The story is about Calima, a beggar who is found by a skaa gang and recruited to help them in their goal of passing themselves off as nobility, all while she learns to use her powers from Andés, a lurcher. I'll try to post an English version as soon as I am able to. And you might wonder, why did I put so much effort into the PFD presentation, trying to imitate a real book? It was mainly because I wanted to test myself if I was capable of creating an apealing cover. (And since I spent a year on this, I want it to look as good as possible) Fragil como la niebla.pdf

Thanks for the response! Regarding the Spanish thing, I am publishing it now in Spanish in case anyone wants to read it in the original language, because I will try to translate it into English in the coming months (It will probably be very difficult).

Hi, I made a Mistborn fanfic of about 160k words and I wanted to ask if it was okay to post it here. I'm not sure if it is allowed due to the size, format (Pdf) and the fact that it is written in Spanish. The setting takes place about 100 years before the first book, in a city far from Luthadel. This is Calima, who will join Manette's gang, who wants her entire team to pose as nobles and establish themselves within the local aristocracy, while she learns to use her powers under the tutelage of Andés. . . It's more of a writing exercise that I wrote throughout 2023.