PrestoTheMagnificent

Alright, thanks for the advice! I added some lore and descriptions, and went a bit heavier into what the premise of the book is. I'm happy with what I came up with.

Wrote a prologue for my NaNoWriMo book, and I think it works for setting up the story quite well. However, it's only a few paragraphs long. How could I expand it? This is what I have:

Yeah, I thought of that too. I'm probably gonna change it a little bit. Yeah, it is for me as well. The idea that the world would slowly whittle down to nothing is interesting to me. Dunno how the science of atmosphere and such works though.

I see, said the blind man.

I think I'm gonna be doing a story idea on the world that I made here

"Very interesting." She said, looking contemplative. She started to try climbing the wall, but fell asleep."

(I posted this in my feed as well, cause I didn't notice this forum existed, haha) Alright, came up with an idea for a fantasy world- Imagine a giant ball of yarn, big enough to be a small planet. (Maybe 0.7 cosmere standard, although this wouldn't be set in the cosmere.) The two magic systems here are Weavers and Cutters. Weavers (depending on the type) can turn blue yarn into water, yellow yarn into grain, green yarn into air, (etc) and weave the actual yarn that makes up the world into buildings. The world keeps getting smaller as the yarn is used. Cutters basically just destroy everything in their path, haven't thought much of them (think of them like using mindblades, kinda.) Couldn't get this dumb but interesting idea out of my head, so I wanted to share it with y'all!

Welcome to the shard! Can't wait to see you participate!

Yup, I was very much spanishing haha

Nope, just googled a translation, haha

Ah. yo quireo recordar este hilo

"Wait. Your name is Abalador? And you're a God?" She looked quizzically at Abalador. "What manner of God?"

Uhhh.... no se?

Yeah, everyone's gotta wait until 8 days after this post is posted to post again

She stood up. "My name is She, and I'm using this body for what it was meant to be used for, which, right now, is leaving." She began to walk away.

Lily takes a swig, drinking deeply. "It just tastes like watered down Root Beer!" she said with a laugh. She stood up. "Thank you all for your help, but really, I must be going." She made as to walk away.

congratulations!

Gotta love how y'all just described the plot of turning red, but replaced a red panda with a dragon.

oh yeah, I got plenty of that too

"I'm... Lily..." Lily yawned. "I should tell you, I suffer from a rare but chronic sleep disorder called narcole-" she suddenly fell asleep.

Yep! Arceus is my favorite pokemon game! (sorry for taking 17 years to respond)

Everything can't be yours, because my dog doesn't belong to you.