Hey guys. I need your opinion on these keteks I threw together.
By the way, I would love to see some of your keteks too.
Keteks
Definition:
A Ketek is a form of holy Vorin poetry which reads the same forward and backward (allowing for changes in verb form), and is also divisible into five sections, each of which also expresses a complete thought.
Death
Death comes. Without stopping Death arrives. Now Death, the death now arrived, Death stops without – Come Death!
Death comes./ Without stopping Death arrives./ Now Death, the death now arrived,/ Death stops without/ – Come Death!
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Diamonds
Beautiful diamonds, the blood of diamonds creates greed – sin to beauty, beauty to sin – greed creates diamonds of blood, the diamonds beautiful.
Beautiful diamonds,/ the blood of diamonds creates greed/ – sin to beauty, beauty to sin – /greed creates diamonds of blood, /the diamonds beautiful.
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Darkness
Darkness encroaches. Nearer, day by day: dawns darkness’s dawn. Day by day nearer, encroaching darkness.
Darkness encroaches/. Nearer, day by day: /dawns darkness’s dawn./ Day by day nearer,/ encroaching darkness.
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Moonlight
Illuminates darkness by moonlight. Silhouettes created by pale and gray light. Dim lights of lights dim, light pale and gray creates silhouettes. Moonlight by darkness illuminates.
Illuminates darkness by moonlight./ Silhouettes created by pale and gray light. /Dim lights of lights dim, /light pale and gray creates silhouettes./ Moonlight by darkness illuminates.
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Note: the second writing of the ketek is separated into its five segments
PS: Szeth-son-son-Vallano is awesome
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