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Look at these poor sods, shown up by a CHULL. God knows the beasts have more brain cells than this lot combined

I came here for a battle of wits, i instead find a bunch of bumbling fools stumbling over each other as they attempt to insult each other. They fail misreably only because their targets are too stupid to realise they are being verbally attacked.

Oh and sorry if i down voted you, i was trying to upvote by I'm still not sure how this site works. Whats reputation? Sorry for noob questions

What if Brandon Sanderson wrote the Stormlight archives?

Thanks for the observation. I know its alittle rough around the corners and there are quiet a few things that can be changed but this is the first draft. NamelessThirteenth and i will be going over it soon to rework the story and we will definatley be fixing any thing that can be improved. Again, thankyou we need all the criticism we can get.(sorry for any spelling mistakes, im speed typing here)

Thankyou and glad to be here.

The first post(the one with Baldrick) was chapter two. My friend couldnt post chapter one because he dosent have it on him but we will be posting it soon. It might be a while though because the story is going under rework and chapter one is currently under heavy maintenance. I know the writing isn't the best but what you see is basic work. We will be going over it and improving it.