coreylansdell

Thanks Argent!

Hi, 

I'm trying to wrap my head around the yes, but and no, and in writing plot.

 

 

So I thought I'd use an example from film to ask my question.

 

In the film Maleficent for example, is the scene where she has her wings cut off a Yes, But example?

 

Yes, she falls in love with the prince, but he turns out to be a power hungry jerk who cuts her wings off which then sends her down a dark path?

 

Is that how this works?

 

How about the no, and?

 

Could that not also be a no, and moment? No they don't end up together, and he turns out to be a power hungry jerk and cuts her wings off?

 

How do we define the difference?

 

Thanks for taking time to answer this!

 

Corey

 

Hi!

I'm really excited to be here. I love writingexcuses.com

 

I am an illustrator, animator, designer and aspiring children's book creator and novelist. I would also really really love to do some book covers down the road for fantasy and scifi books. 

 

I am 40000 words into the rough draft of my first novel and have a children's book in the works. 

 

I am the co-owner and creative director of a small creative studio in Edmonton, Alberta, Canada. 

 

Here's a bunch of links so you can get to know me if you so choose. 

 

@coreylansdell on twitter

coreylansdell.com (Personal portfolio)

pulpstudios.ca (business website)

https://instagram.com/coreylansdell/

http://our1984.blogspot.ca/(blog about my children's book and trying to bring it to life)

 

Thanks for this!!!