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Two Keteks I wrote

Nexus Darkshade

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I would like some critiquing of these two keteks I wrote today.


My masterpiece, which came to me in a random thought:

Stars align, and hands, reaching for reaching hands, align stars.

Stars align,/ and hands,/ reaching for reaching hands,/ align stars.


A ketek I had to think out word by word:

Winds raging, battling against men, prepare men battling against raging winds.

Winds raging,/ battling against men,/ prepare men/ battling against raging winds.

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