Delightful Posted January 17, 2017 Posted January 17, 2017 As I mentioned in Random Stuff X...yesterday?....I'm trying out a story building tool. Basically, I'm writing characters fanfic style, just throwing them into random situations, bouncing them off each other, experimenting with different personality types and settings without consideration for plot. (Also because when I'm trying to write a Big Project I freak myself out, so this way I can keep it fun and silly, and when I have my characters well established I can write them into a novel which I do have some plot ideas for). So I'm doing it through this blog: http://delightfulchameleon.weebly.com My plan is to write *something* daily, I'll start by trying to update daily, I imagine short scenes to begin with that should get longer when I get more in practise. I'm trying to balance discipline with shut-down imposter syndrome so even if I write daily I won't necessarily post it......I guess we'll just see how it goes. Feedback is welcome, what works, what doesn't, if you feel like I've made a promise to the reader, if something particularly intrigues you or just plain doesn't work, please tell me! 3
Oversleep Posted January 17, 2017 Posted January 17, 2017 I see you wanted to interwine the chatting with the book passages in her thoughts but it confused the hell out of me. Had to read it a few times to get it.
A Budgie she/her Posted January 17, 2017 Posted January 17, 2017 Sounds like a good idea for getting down character personalities. With what you wrote...I agree that her thoughts on the book mingling with the conversation were a little confusing, although it was kinda what thoughts are like. Having it in quotation marks made me think she was talking at first, though, so you might want to change that. I usually use italics to show thought.
Delightful Posted January 17, 2017 Author Posted January 17, 2017 Hmm ok that was definitely an experiment. Thanks!
A Budgie she/her Posted January 25, 2017 Posted January 25, 2017 That was good. I think it was better than the first one, but that might just be me. Oh, and an edit: “Lu” she called over her shoulder. He waited for her to give an address, but she was already gone. Comma after her name, perhaps?
A Budgie she/her Posted January 26, 2017 Posted January 26, 2017 4 hours ago, Darkness Ascendant said: I do enjoy a good pie To be honest, I already feel sorry for that character. Unless they don't have pies there, she probably has so many jokes made about her name.
Darkness Ascendant he/him Posted January 27, 2017 Posted January 27, 2017 16 hours ago, A Budgie said: To be honest, I already feel sorry for that character. Unless they don't have pies there, she probably has so many jokes made about her name. Most of them I think would be quite inappropriate. At least the ones I can think of
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