Dieselpunk Writing Project

[Prince of Ravens he/him]

So, this is my first writing project in English. I had a lot of short stories and unfinished novels in my native language, but this would be my first try in English. So have in mind that. This is part of the first chapter and title and something’s are still work in progress. Anything you want to say about it is welcome, criticism or whatever.

 

So what is this about? It's about the world one thousand years after the apocalypse. There is mix of diesel and steam punk aesthetics and it should be light read. It wouldn't go too deep in to the war and carnage but it would touch some of the darker subjects. So it wouldn't really be for too young readers.

 

So hope you enjoy this little part and tell me what you think. Have to warn you that there are some light sexual themes in this excerpt, so if you are not into that I am sorry

 

DieselPunk.docx

 

https://www.dropbox.com/s/da1bq26qyxmtb97/DieselPunk.docx?dl=0

[Curious Anamaximder he/him]

Awesome!

[Ookla the Absent]

So hope you enjoy this little part and tell me what you think. Have to warn you that there are some light sexual themes in this excerpt, so if you are not into that I am sorry

"Light"?

[Prince of Ravens he/him]

"Light"?

As in I wouldn't rate it X More like PG13. But that can change in either direction 

Edited December 19, 2015 by Prince of Ravens

[ChickenPlague he/him]

I wouldn't call that light. Also are you from Latvia by any chance?

[Prince of Ravens he/him]

I wouldn't call that light. Also are you from Latvia by any chance?

No, I am from Serbia. Guess sensibility and reaction to sex is diferent from culture to culture.

[ChickenPlague he/him]

Oh okay the "č" made me think that. And the question was unrelated to the previous statement.