Prince of Ravens he/him Posted December 13, 2015 Report Share Posted December 13, 2015 So, this is my first writing project in English. I had a lot of short stories and unfinished novels in my native language, but this would be my first try in English. So have in mind that. This is part of the first chapter and title and something’s are still work in progress. Anything you want to say about it is welcome, criticism or whatever. So what is this about? It's about the world one thousand years after the apocalypse. There is mix of diesel and steam punk aesthetics and it should be light read. It wouldn't go too deep in to the war and carnage but it would touch some of the darker subjects. So it wouldn't really be for too young readers. So hope you enjoy this little part and tell me what you think. Have to warn you that there are some light sexual themes in this excerpt, so if you are not into that I am sorry DieselPunk.docx https://www.dropbox.com/s/da1bq26qyxmtb97/DieselPunk.docx?dl=0 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Curious Anamaximder he/him Posted December 16, 2015 Report Share Posted December 16, 2015 Awesome! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookla the Absent Posted December 19, 2015 Report Share Posted December 19, 2015 So hope you enjoy this little part and tell me what you think. Have to warn you that there are some light sexual themes in this excerpt, so if you are not into that I am sorry "Light"? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince of Ravens he/him Posted December 19, 2015 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2015 (edited) "Light"? As in I wouldn't rate it X More like PG13. But that can change in either direction Edited December 19, 2015 by Prince of Ravens 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChickenPlague he/him Posted December 19, 2015 Report Share Posted December 19, 2015 I wouldn't call that light. Also are you from Latvia by any chance? 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince of Ravens he/him Posted December 19, 2015 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2015 I wouldn't call that light. Also are you from Latvia by any chance? No, I am from Serbia. Guess sensibility and reaction to sex is diferent from culture to culture. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChickenPlague he/him Posted December 19, 2015 Report Share Posted December 19, 2015 Oh okay the "č" made me think that. And the question was unrelated to the previous statement. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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