Echo Posted June 30, 2015 Posted June 30, 2015 SO. I wrote this Mistborn poem that I am RIDICULOUSLY proud of, and I had to share it with you. Plus, it means that if any of you guys have any poems that are Cosmere related, or may seem Cosmere related, then you can put them here. Also, I'm sorry if my poem is horrible and turns your eyes into smoke and kills you, but really I wouldn't be sorry for that because that would mean that I made something that is the equivalent of a Shardblade, and that would just be awesome. Some big-ish spoilers. The first stanza is the first book, the second is the second book, and so on. It's called... Mistborn Poem (I know, so original, right?) Living in this world of red, Being different is a crime. And in this land of darkness, We are running out of time. We never thought that freedom, Could be worse than what we knew. But no one saw the difference, They saw nothing they could do. A good king that was tyrant, A woman who killed a fraud. A broken hearted scholar, Who once became a god. 13
spencer12347 he/him Posted June 30, 2015 Posted June 30, 2015 A broken hearted scholar, Who once became a god. That was the best line in the whole poem. Good job! 1
Steel Compounder Posted July 1, 2015 Posted July 1, 2015 That was the best line in the whole poem. Good job! Definitely. 1
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