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[Paul SB]

Salutations! (to quote a familiar arachnid),

 

From this point on our heroes are on separate missions on different planets. The first entry here follows RM in her dual quest to get info about the mythical homeward of the Humans and find AH’s brother who were separated as children. Something happens to RM that hints about things that could affect all of them in unpredictable ways.

 

The second entry has TL and PM reach an old world colony, one that has been mostly left behind by the Meritocracy as not worth the investment. One thing that concerns me about this one is that their contact is a character who was first introduced in a chapter in the first book that was recommended I edit out. That probably gives an appearance of the character being manufactured on the spot, fit for purpose. S-Y isn’t quite a throw away character, but still very minor. The question with S-Y is if she needs a new introduction.

 

Enjoy the reading!