Paul SB - BackboneofNight sub07, 4199 words

[Paul SB]

Hello once again,

 

Our first entry has A meeting a data nexus who is to work with her on adapting the colony. In the process she learns some important things about both the alien’s mentality and how different their technology is from anyone else’s. Unfortunately this is another chapter that is pretty much all talk, so I’m concerned that the pacing is too slow.

 

In the next entry ME has been waiting around with the Terrible Trio trying to get passage to Dirt when M finds the band he used to play with and hitches a ride. ME meets the band members and is happier with them than with the three thieves they have been working with. Nothing momentous happens, and the band members are not hugely important to the plot, so this might be another chapter that could be cut.

 

Thanks again, and I hope all y’all are enjoying the ride.