Paul SB - BackboneofNight sub06, 3847 words

[Paul SB]

Hello once again,

 

In the first entry we get a little Anthropology 101, which is important thematically for the story but plot-wise it’s only a transition, so it might be a good chapter to cut. The problem is finding a way to show what they talk about (you can probably tell this was a chapter I wrote way back in 2001). The next chapter is also all conversation; a discussion of the situation at the colony. I’m not sure if there is a way to get this information across otherwise. It makes sense that this is something that would be discussed directly, like the topic of a meeting, but meetings are still pretty  boring.

 

Thanks for taking a look. I would love to hear what people think.