I'm Kaladist!

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25 minutes ago, Kansas Stormcursed said:

I'm glad this is done, not a trash bin dud, and even better it didn't have to be 

did you notice this

[Kansas Stormcursed he/him]

1 minute ago, Kaladist The Ketek Writer said:

did you notice this

What

I don't understand

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ninja'd

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Thanks admin for moving us! Moving, for admin. Thanks!

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7 hours ago, Kaladist The Ketek Writer said:

Free but once, enslaved. Kaladin.

A second chance but not one first.

Be strong, Stormblessed.

Your spren, wind yours, waits for your burst.

 

Being him, what’s full of light

That in living, and newly now, hope very thinned

Echoning, A warrior hiding behind flawed protection

Wishing for running wind.

 

Death of finders: the broken,

Falling deep into the pits of sorrow.

Breathing men carry the bridge,

Suffering for hollow tomorrow.

 

Ridges, that from rising Light,

Fighting for the men who bled.

Bridge Four stands,

Where the broken are led.

 

Honor died once.

For the slave, a goner.

Now gone, a slave.

That for once-dying Honor.

 

Leaders are broken,

That's where stands Fourth Bridge.

Bleeding whose men; that for fighting,

Light rising from the ridge.

 

Tomorrow hollow, for suffering,

Bridges the carryman's breath.

Sorrow of pits; that into deep falling,

Broken that finding of death.

 

Windrunner. Radiant. For wisher’s protection.

Flaws behind, hiding warrior an echo thin.

Very hopes, now anew and alive

In the light of fully what he’s been

 

Bursting you for awaiting your windspren

Your blessed storms, strong being

First one: not but choosing seconds

A Kaladin enslaved once, but freeing.

 

I'm glad this is done, not a trash bin dud, and even better it didn't have to be 

how did that only take 30 minutes

is it okay I used chance/choice?

Epic!!!!!

Yea, chance / choice should be fine

6 hours ago, Kaladist The Ketek Writer said:

I repeat: is it okay I used chance/choice?

also, is it appropriate to say we're all shardbuddies now?

Yes please, I would love to be Shardbuddies!!!

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alright guys, is it okay if I take the collective of the work here and use it for an English assignment?

Edited February 9 by Kaladist The Ketek Writer

[Myst He/Him]

3 hours ago, Kaladist The Ketek Writer said:

alright guys, is it okay if I take the collective of the work here and use it for an English assignment?

As long as you give credit to the people who made the individual keteks, I’m fine with you using mine

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ok

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help me meter this 

Free but once, enslaved. Kaladin.- 8 syllables 
A second chance but not one first.- 8 syllables 
Be strong, Stormblessed.- 4 syllables
Your spren, wind yours, waits for your burst.- 8 syllables 

Being him, what’s full of light, that in life.-10 syllables
And newly now, hope very thinned.-7 syllables
Echoning, a warrior hiding behind flawed protection,-15 syllables
Wishing for running wind.-6 syllables

Death of finders: the broken,-7 syllables
Falling deep into the pits of sorrow.-9 syllables
Breathing men carry the bridge,-7 syllables
Suffering for hollow tomorrow.-9 syllables

Ridges, that from rising Light,-7 syllables
Fighting for the men who bled.-7 syllables
Bridge Four stands hopeful,-5 syllables
Where the broken are led.-6 syllables

Honor died once.-4 syllables
For a slave, a goner.-6 syllables
Now gone, a slave.-4 syllables
For a once-dying Honor.-7 syllables

Leaders are broken,-5 syllables
That's where stands hopeful Fourth Bridge.-7 syllables
Bleeding whose men; that for fighting,-8 syllables
Light rising from the ridge.-6 syllables

Tomorrow hollow, for suffering,-9 syllables
Bridges the carryman's breath.-7 syllables
Sorrow of pits; that into deep falling,-10 syllables
Broken that finding of death.-7 syllables

Windrunner. Radiant. For wishers.-9 syllables
Protected flaws behind, hiding warrior an echo thin.-15 syllables
Very hopes, now anew and alive.-9 syllables
In the light of fully what he’s been.-9 syllables

Bursting you for awaiting your windspren, -10 syllables
Your blessed storms, strong being.-6 syllables
First one: not but chancing seconds.-8 syllables
A Kaladin enslaved once, but freeing.-10 syllables

metering, rhyming, symmetry, making, too hard it is. its hard to make symmetrical, rhyming, metered.

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*ahem

[Myst He/Him]

13 minutes ago, Kaladist The Ketek Writer said:

*ahem

Looks cool, I assume it’s the ketek you posted earlier, so good job. Plus the ketek itself is really nice

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Just now, Mistfallen Soldier said:

Looks cool, I assume it’s the ketek you posted earlier, so good job. Plus the ketek itself is really nice

that is correct, I just wanted to put it somewhere.

<sniff> Memories.

[Kansas Stormcursed he/him]

24 minutes ago, Kaladist The Ketek Writer said:

*ahem

Dang man

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Alright, I'm done ketek-ing for the day, but I would want to hear more  EVEN IF it doesn't rhyme.

...

ketek-ing?

Edited February 9 by Kaladist The Ketek Writer

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Unity is honor, we fall.
Broken, the soul mends through oaths radiant—
Seeking life, we find death;
Finding our lives seek Radiance.
Oaths through mending, souls that break;
Falling, our Honor is united.

Oh hi there Kansas.

I see you

Wake up, from down back to nothing

Its over for me.

I can't go.

I wish I would.

I wish I'd go.

Can't I?

I'm for, over it.

Nothing to back down from.

Up, awake.

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7 hours ago, Kaladist The Ketek Writer said:

Unity is honor, we fall.
Broken, the soul mends through oaths radiant—
Seeking life, we find death;
Finding our lives seek Radiance.
Oaths through mending, souls that break;
Falling, our Honor is united.

Oh hi there Kansas.

I see you

Wake up, from down back to nothing

Its over for me.

I can't go.

I wish I would.

I wish I'd go.

Can't I?

I'm for, over it.

Nothing to back down from.

Up, awake.

Awesome!!!!

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thx

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Soldier stood alone, watching dying embers. Fire consumed the ancient and cold stones. Silence. A war was again started, then ended, then started again. Was war a silent stone, cold and ancient, the consuming fire? Embers dying, watching, alone stood soldiers.

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Sharp pain,

Struck with hard blow.

The blow, hard, with striking,

Painfully sharp.

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Hey I found this cool poem I thought you might like! It's not quite a Ketek, but...

Spoiler

Doppelganger

 

by James A. Lindon (Dmitri Borgmann’s Beyond Language – 1967).

 

Entering the lonely house with my wife

I saw him for the first time

Peering furtively from behind a bush —

Blackness that moved,

A shape amid the shadows,

A momentary glimpse of gleaming eyes

Revealed in the ragged moon.

A closer look (he seemed to turn) might have

Put him to flight forever —

I dared not act at once.

(For reasons that I failed to understand),

Though I knew I shouldI puzzled over it, hiding alone,

Watching the woman as she neared the gate.

He came, and I saw him crouching

Night after night.

Night after night

He came, and I saw him crouching,

Watching the woman as she neared the gate.

I puzzled over it, hiding alone —

Though I knew I should 

For reasons that I failed to understand

I dared not act at once.

Put him to flight forever.

A closer look (he seemed to turn) might have

Revealed in the ragged moon.

A momentary glimpse of gleaming eyes

A shape amid the shadows,

Blackness that moved.

Peering furtively from behind a bush,

I saw him for the first time,

Entering the lonely house with my wife.

 

Edited March 14 by Through the Living Ink
Spag

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coooooooooooll.....

A poem with a 10-word vocabulary:
That jumble of words, in a sense, for my minding.
Of minding my words, in a jumble, that for sense.
For sense my jumble, that. In words: a minding of.
Sense of my words? In that, for a minding jumble.
For jumble my words of a minding, in that sense.
….
….
A wordy mind. In the jumble. For senses of myself.

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A poem with a 7 word vocabulary:
People used small terms, with a cost.
Terms: used. With a small cost. A people.
Small people used terms with a cost.
Used with a people, small terms cost.
Used people. A cost with small terms. 
…..
…..
People use costly terms with a smallness.
 

NOOOOOOOOOOOO I double posted NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

[Kansas Stormcursed he/him]

3 minutes ago, Through The Living Ketek said:

A poem with a 7 word vocabulary:
People used small terms, with a cost.
Terms: used. With a small cost. A people.
Small people used terms with a cost.
Used with a people, small terms cost.
Used people. A cost with small terms. 
…..
…..
People use costly terms with a smallness.
 

NOOOOOOOOOOOO I double posted NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Double-posting is fine if you have new information to add like this

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4 hours ago, Through The Living Ketek said:

coooooooooooll.....

A poem with a 10-word vocabulary:
That jumble of words, in a sense, for my minding.
Of minding my words, in a jumble, that for sense.
For sense my jumble, that. In words: a minding of.
Sense of my words? In that, for a minding jumble.
For jumble my words of a minding, in that sense.
….
….
A wordy mind. In the jumble. For senses of myself.

 

3 hours ago, Through The Living Ketek said:

A poem with a 7 word vocabulary:
People used small terms, with a cost.
Terms: used. With a small cost. A people.
Small people used terms with a cost.
Used with a people, small terms cost.
Used people. A cost with small terms. 
…..
…..
People use costly terms with a smallness.
 

NOOOOOOOOOOOO I double posted NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

WOW

That's extremely impressive 

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thank you!   I'm trying to make a 5 word one