I'm Kaladist!

[Shatter He/Him]

14 minutes ago, Kaladist The Ketek Writer said:

rhyme list

Honor: goner, spawner, donner, conner

Light: fight, right, might, slight, sight, -ite, -ight

Kaladin: paladin

Syl: -ill, mill, 'til, fill, chill

Storm: form, norm, warm

Wind: -inned, sinned, pinned

Radiant: uhhhhhhhhhh...

Spren: men, again, Fen, pen, den

Bridge: ridge, smidge

Run: fun, done, ton

Herald: uhhhhhh....

Stormblessed: 

- if blessed is 2 syllables: idk

- if blessed is 1 syllable: chest, messed, guest, pest

Prince: mince

Light/dark eyes: spies, disguise, demise, flies

Blade: fade, grenade, paid, jade

Plate: fate, hate, mate, gate, irate

Shared: hard, guard, yard, scarred

for bless-ed

rested
tested
vested
nested
bested
jested
crested

[Through The Living Ketek He/Him/His]

I had worked hard for nearly two years, for the sole purpose of infusing life into an inanimate body. For this I had deprived myself of rest and health. I had desired it with an ardour that far exceeded moderation; but now that I had finished, the beauty of the dream vanished, and breathless horror and disgust filled my heart. Unable to endure the aspect of the being I had created, I rushed out of the room.

I had worked hard for nearly two years, for the sole purpose of infusing life into an inanimate body. For this I had deprived myself of rest and health. I had desired it with an ardour that far exceeded moderation; but now that I had finished, the beauty of the dream vanished, and breathless horror and disgust filled my heart. Unable to endure the aspect of the being I had created, I rushed out of the room.

blackout poem I just made!

it's from Frankenstein 

Low key, is Ishar just Dr. Frankenstein ?

[Through The Living Ketek He/Him/His]

So, this took me ALL Day and I still can't rhyme it at all.

Slave of the pits,
Broken bridges running toward death-
Which chases them.
Barely standing, Bridge Four's bridge stands--- barely,
They chase which death towards?
Running bridges, broken pits that of slavery.

Storms, that with lightning, storm toward the man,
A hero rising, freeing men
Non-loved one, no, be strong!
Blessed storms, Radiant, Stormblessed:
Strongly being.

No one's not loved.

Men, free, rising heroically,
A man, that towards Stormlight, within the storm.

Salvation for lost ones,
Shields raised, protecting weak
Those protections of Honor's honor.
To the only second Ideal!

Windrunner.

Ideals, second only to Honor:
Honor of protecting the weak,
Protected, raised, shielded ones,
Lost for salvation.

[Myst He/Him]

36 minutes ago, Kaladist The Ketek Writer said:

So, this took me ALL Day and I still can't rhyme it at all.

Slave of the pits,
Broken bridges running toward death-
Which chases them.
Barely standing, Bridge Four's bridge stands--- barely,
They chase which death towards?
Running bridges, broken pits that of slavery.

Storms, that with lightning, storm toward the man,
A hero rising, freeing men
Non-loved one, no, be strong!
Blessed storms, Radiant, Stormblessed:
Strongly being.

No one's not loved.

Men, free, rising heroically,
A man, that towards Stormlight, within the storm.

Salvation for lost ones,
Shields raised, protecting weak
Those protections of Honor's honor.
To the only second Ideal!

Windrunner.

Ideals, second only to Honor:
Honor of protecting the weak,
Protected, raised, shielded ones,
Lost for salvation.

It’s still really good

Also, I’m not going to be much help for the next week or so, I’m watching an SE game right now and it is so interesting!

[Kansas Stormcursed he/him]

41 minutes ago, Kaladist The Ketek Writer said:

So, this took me ALL Day and I still can't rhyme it at all.

Slave of the pits,
Broken bridges running toward death-
Which chases them.
Barely standing, Bridge Four's bridge stands--- barely,
They chase which death towards?
Running bridges, broken pits that of slavery.

Storms, that with lightning, storm toward the man,
A hero rising, freeing men
Non-loved one, no, be strong!
Blessed storms, Radiant, Stormblessed:
Strongly being.

No one's not loved.

Men, free, rising heroically,
A man, that towards Stormlight, within the storm.

Salvation for lost ones,
Shields raised, protecting weak
Those protections of Honor's honor.
To the only second Ideal!

Windrunner.

Ideals, second only to Honor:
Honor of protecting the weak,
Protected, raised, shielded ones,
Lost for salvation.

That's sick

I've been working on altering one of the ones to rhyme, but it's taking a while as it's quite complicated. I've also just been busy

[Through The Living Ketek He/Him/His]

9 minutes ago, Mistfallen Soldier said:

Also, I’m not going to be much help for the next week or so, I’m watching an SE game right now and it is so interesting!

Please. What exactly (explain in detail) is SE? Is detail in explanation, exactly what pleases.

i'm practicing keteks so much I can't help it  

Help! can't I? Much, so keteks. Practicing am I!

[Myst He/Him]

1 minute ago, Kaladist The Ketek Writer said:

Please. What exactly (explain in detail) is SE? Is detail in explanation, exactly what pleases.

i'm practicing keteks so much I can't help it  

Help! can't I? Much, so keteks. Practicing am I!

Pretty much Mafia

check this out it’ll explain things, plus there’s a game going on right now

[Through The Living Ketek He/Him/His]

*Ahem

 

 

It kind of goes nowhere, but the whole three verses are one ketek

 

Slaves, broken, running through storm and fire.
Honor is dead, wherein the chasm’s shadow.
Bridge Four carries the weight of death.
A heavy, broken, forgotten crew.
Darkness surrounds their silent stride.

They carry the bridge, but Kaladin carries them.
Life blooms from the chasms, anew.
Shards are broken by wind and honor.
Honor and wind shatter the broken Shards.
Newly, a chasm that from blooms life.

They carry Kaladin, but bridges carry them.
Strides silent .
They surround darkness.
Crews forgotten, broken, heavy.
A death of weight that carries fourth bridge.
Shadow’s chasm that’s where death is.
Honor’s fire and storm through running, broken, slaves.

[Through The Living Ketek He/Him/His]

DID IT! IT RHYMES! AT TRYING, FIRST, LOOK! FIRST TRY AT RHYMING IT- IT DID!

Verse 1

Death of finders: the broken,
Falling deep into the pits of sorrow.
Breathing men carry the bridge,
Suffering for hollow tomorrow.

Verse 2

Ridges, that from rising Light,
Fighting for the men who bled.
Bridge Four stands,
Where the broken are led.

Verse 3

Honor died once.
For a slave, a goner.
Now gone, a slave.
For a once-dying Honor.

Verse 4 

Leaders are broken,
That's where stands Fourth Bridge.
Bleeding whose men; that for fighting,
Light rising from the ridge.

Verse 5

Tomorrow hollow, for suffering,
Bridges the carryman's breath.
Sorrow of pits; that into deep falling,
Broken that finding of death.

@Kansas Stormcursed!

@Ink and Embers @CoderDrag0n8 @Mistfallen Soldier 

Edited February 5 by Kaladist The Ketek Writer

[Through the Living Shadow he/him]

21 minutes ago, Kaladist The Ketek Writer said:

DID IT! IT RHYMES! AT TRYING, FIRST, LOOK! FIRST TRY AT RHYMING IT- IT DID!

Verse 1

Death of finders: the broken,
Falling deep into the pits of sorrow.
Breathing men carry the bridge,
Suffering for hollow tomorrow.

Verse 2

Ridges, that from rising Light,
Fighting for the men who bled.
Bridge Four stands,
Where the broken are led.

Verse 3

Honor died once.
For a slave, a goner.
Now gone, a slave.
For a once-dying Honor.

Verse 4 

Leaders are broken,
That's where stands Fourth Bridge.
Bleeding whose men; that for fighting,
Light rising from the ridge.

Verse 5

Tomorrow hollow, for suffering,
Bridges the carryman's breath.
Sorrow of pits; that into deep falling,
Broken that finding of death.

@Kansas Stormcursed!

@Ink and Embers @CoderDrag0n8 @Mistfallen Soldier 

Oop

woah

i should be scared

[Through The Living Ketek He/Him/His]

Hi do you like it, like you do? HI

[Myst He/Him]

Just now, Kaladist The Ketek Writer said:

Hi do you like it, like you do? HI

I absolutely love it, though I’m sure you put so much time into it to get it to rhyme

[Through The Living Ketek He/Him/His]

Just now, Mistfallen Soldier said:

I absolutely love it, though I’m sure you put so much time into it to get it to rhyme

So.

the Ketek part took a while.

the rhyme editing took like 20 minutes for some reason.

[Kansas Stormcursed he/him]

3 hours ago, Kaladist The Ketek Writer said:

DID IT! IT RHYMES! AT TRYING, FIRST, LOOK! FIRST TRY AT RHYMING IT- IT DID!

Verse 1

Death of finders: the broken,
Falling deep into the pits of sorrow.
Breathing men carry the bridge,
Suffering for hollow tomorrow.

Verse 2

Ridges, that from rising Light,
Fighting for the men who bled.
Bridge Four stands,
Where the broken are led.

Verse 3

Honor died once.
For a slave, a goner.
Now gone, a slave.
For a once-dying Honor.

Verse 4 

Leaders are broken,
That's where stands Fourth Bridge.
Bleeding whose men; that for fighting,
Light rising from the ridge.

Verse 5

Tomorrow hollow, for suffering,
Bridges the carryman's breath.
Sorrow of pits; that into deep falling,
Broken that finding of death.

@Kansas Stormcursed!

@Ink and Embers @CoderDrag0n8 @Mistfallen Soldier 

Yoo dude that's sick

Much better than what I was trying to come up with

[Through The Living Ketek He/Him/His]

So yeah the Ketek itself took basically the entirety of the time spent cognitively awake since my previous post here, but the rhyming turned out to be much easier than I thought.

also, something's up w/ that Sanderson elimination forum:

 

[CoderDrag0n8 He/They]

4 hours ago, Kaladist The Ketek Writer said:

DID IT! IT RHYMES! AT TRYING, FIRST, LOOK! FIRST TRY AT RHYMING IT- IT DID!

Verse 1

Death of finders: the broken,
Falling deep into the pits of sorrow.
Breathing men carry the bridge,
Suffering for hollow tomorrow.

Verse 2

Ridges, that from rising Light,
Fighting for the men who bled.
Bridge Four stands,
Where the broken are led.

Verse 3

Honor died once.
For a slave, a goner.
Now gone, a slave.
For a once-dying Honor.

Verse 4 

Leaders are broken,
That's where stands Fourth Bridge.
Bleeding whose men; that for fighting,
Light rising from the ridge.

Verse 5

Tomorrow hollow, for suffering,
Bridges the carryman's breath.
Sorrow of pits; that into deep falling,
Broken that finding of death.

@Kansas Stormcursed!

@Ink and Embers @CoderDrag0n8 @Mistfallen Soldier 

THAT IS BARS.

[Through The Living Ketek He/Him/His]

alright, alright

<blushes>

it's not that good

It's just 5 verses!

 

Edited February 6 by Kaladist The Ketek Writer

[Kansas Stormcursed he/him]

Just now, Kaladist The Ketek Writer said:

alright, alright

<blushes>

it's not that good

It's just three verses!

 

But it's shows quite some skill

[Ink and Embers Any pronouns]

20 hours ago, Kaladist The Ketek Writer said:

DID IT! IT RHYMES! AT TRYING, FIRST, LOOK! FIRST TRY AT RHYMING IT- IT DID!

Verse 1

Death of finders: the broken,
Falling deep into the pits of sorrow.
Breathing men carry the bridge,
Suffering for hollow tomorrow.

Verse 2

Ridges, that from rising Light,
Fighting for the men who bled.
Bridge Four stands,
Where the broken are led.

Verse 3

Honor died once.
For a slave, a goner.
Now gone, a slave.
For a once-dying Honor.

Verse 4 

Leaders are broken,
That's where stands Fourth Bridge.
Bleeding whose men; that for fighting,
Light rising from the ridge.

Verse 5

Tomorrow hollow, for suffering,
Bridges the carryman's breath.
Sorrow of pits; that into deep falling,
Broken that finding of death.

@Kansas Stormcursed!

@Ink and Embers @CoderDrag0n8 @Mistfallen Soldier 

AAAAAAAAAA

AMAZING 

YOU'VE MADE A RHYMING KETEK SONG

15 hours ago, Kaladist The Ketek Writer said:

alright, alright

<blushes>

it's not that good

It's just 5 verses!

 

SO?!!! IT'S STILL AWESOME!!!!

[Through The Living Ketek He/Him/His]

thanks!

 

[Through The Living Ketek He/Him/His]

imma make the rhyme song bigger gimme like an hour or two

[Through The Living Ketek He/Him/His]

Free but once, enslaved. Kaladin.

A second chance but not one first.

Be strong, Stormblessed.

Your spren, wind yours, waits for your burst.

 

Being him, what’s full of light

That in living, and newly now, hope very thinned

Echoning, A warrior hiding behind flawed protection

Wishing for running wind.

 

Death of finders: the broken,

Falling deep into the pits of sorrow.

Breathing men carry the bridge,

Suffering for hollow tomorrow.

 

Ridges, that from rising Light,

Fighting for the men who bled.

Bridge Four stands,

Where the broken are led.

 

Honor died once.

For the slave, a goner.

Now gone, a slave.

That for once-dying Honor.

 

Leaders are broken,

That's where stands Fourth Bridge.

Bleeding whose men; that for fighting,

Light rising from the ridge.

 

Tomorrow hollow, for suffering,

Bridges the carryman's breath.

Sorrow of pits; that into deep falling,

Broken that finding of death.

 

Windrunner. Radiant. For wisher’s protection.

Flaws behind, hiding warrior an echo thin.

Very hopes, now anew and alive

In the light of fully what he’s been

 

Bursting you for awaiting your windspren

Your blessed storms, strong being

First one: not but choosing seconds

A Kaladin enslaved once, but freeing.

 

I'm glad this is done, not a trash bin dud, and even better it didn't have to be 

how did that only take 30 minutes

is it okay I used chance/choice?

[Kansas Stormcursed he/him]

57 minutes ago, Kaladist The Ketek Writer said:

Free but once, enslaved. Kaladin.

A second chance but not one first.

Be strong, Stormblessed.

Your spren, wind yours, waits for your burst.

 

Being him, what’s full of light

That in living, and newly now, hope very thinned

Echoning, A warrior hiding behind flawed protection

Wishing for running wind.

 

Death of finders: the broken,

Falling deep into the pits of sorrow.

Breathing men carry the bridge,

Suffering for hollow tomorrow.

 

Ridges, that from rising Light,

Fighting for the men who bled.

Bridge Four stands,

Where the broken are led.

 

Honor died once.

For the slave, a goner.

Now gone, a slave.

That for once-dying Honor.

 

Leaders are broken,

That's where stands Fourth Bridge.

Bleeding whose men; that for fighting,

Light rising from the ridge.

 

Tomorrow hollow, for suffering,

Bridges the carryman's breath.

Sorrow of pits; that into deep falling,

Broken that finding of death.

 

Windrunner. Radiant. For wisher’s protection.

Flaws behind, hiding warrior an echo thin.

Very hopes, now anew and alive

In the light of fully what he’s been

 

Bursting you for awaiting your windspren

Your blessed storms, strong being

First one: not but choosing seconds

A Kaladin enslaved once, but freeing.

 

I'm glad this is done, not a trash bin dud, and even better it didn't have to be 

how did that only take 30 minutes

is it okay I used chance/choice?

That's sick man

[Through The Living Ketek He/Him/His]

I repeat: is it okay I used chance/choice?

also, is it appropriate to say we're all shardbuddies now?

[Kansas Stormcursed he/him]

13 minutes ago, Kaladist The Ketek Writer said:

I repeat: is it okay I used chance/choice?

also, is it appropriate to say we're all shardbuddies now?

I think that's a fair pairing

Also, I at least would love to be Shardbuddies