Through The Living Ketek He/Him/His Posted March 18 Author Posted March 18 Long phrases are too much, Phrases are much too long. Are too! Much long phrases. Much long? Are phrases too. Too much are long! Phrases. …. …. Many are longing. To phrases! 1
al_lan_mandragoran Posted March 19 Posted March 19 Ok, Kaladist. What's your favourite ketek you've made? 1
Through The Living Ketek He/Him/His Posted March 19 Author Posted March 19 the first one in this topic
Through The Living Ketek He/Him/His Posted March 19 Author Posted March 19 this one: Newly broken skies scarred the running winds’ determination. The togetherness be broken, the maker of that conflict. The resolution was standing under great, impossible burdens. With men seeing gods near death. Dark, made powerful, combined haste with feelings more to come. Had they drifted closer, spirits might have lived. They then tried.. And, enemies all over them, won them over. All enemies. And, trying, then… Their lives had mightiness. Spirits closely drifting. They had come to more feelings. Hastily combined power made darkness die. Near-gods saw men with burdens impossibly great. Understanding was resolving the conflict, that of making. The broken being together; The determined Windrunner. The scarred Skybreaker. Anew. On 2/9/2026 at 2:10 PM, Through The Living Ketek said: help me meter this Free but once, enslaved. Kaladin.- 8 syllables A second chance but not one first.- 8 syllables Be strong, Stormblessed.- 4 syllables Your spren, wind yours, waits for your burst.- 8 syllables Being him, what’s full of light, that in life.-10 syllables And newly now, hope very thinned.-7 syllables Echoning, a warrior hiding behind flawed protection,-15 syllables Wishing for running wind.-6 syllables Death of finders: the broken,-7 syllables Falling deep into the pits of sorrow.-9 syllables Breathing men carry the bridge,-7 syllables Suffering for hollow tomorrow.-9 syllables Ridges, that from rising Light,-7 syllables Fighting for the men who bled.-7 syllables Bridge Four stands hopeful,-5 syllables Where the broken are led.-6 syllables Honor died once.-4 syllables For a slave, a goner.-6 syllables Now gone, a slave.-4 syllables For a once-dying Honor.-7 syllables Leaders are broken,-5 syllables That's where stands hopeful Fourth Bridge.-7 syllables Bleeding whose men; that for fighting,-8 syllables Light rising from the ridge.-6 syllables Tomorrow hollow, for suffering,-9 syllables Bridges the carryman's breath.-7 syllables Sorrow of pits; that into deep falling,-10 syllables Broken that finding of death.-7 syllables Windrunner. Radiant. For wishers.-9 syllables Protected flaws behind, hiding warrior an echo thin.-15 syllables Very hopes, now anew and alive.-9 syllables In the light of fully what he’s been.-9 syllables Bursting you for awaiting your windspren, -10 syllables Your blessed storms, strong being.-6 syllables First one: not but chancing seconds.-8 syllables A Kaladin enslaved once, but freeing.-10 syllables metering, rhyming, symmetry, making, too hard it is. its hard to make symmetrical, rhyming, metered. this one is also one of the greats 1
Through The Living Ketek He/Him/His Posted March 23 Author Posted March 23 Once for it does. Please, everything is considered an existing conflict these days. Whose blamed? Who started this? Is this justified? Wars have been started over religion, of all excuses! What happens after every war? An instability, more fighting, tension, and strife. But is that important for the people that are powerful? The powers are that. People. That for importance that is but strife. And tension’s fight more unstable, a war ever after. Happening what excuses all of religion. Over starting beings have warring justifications; this is the start. Who blamed who? Daily, these conflicts exist. A consideration is everything. Please do it for once. 3
Through The Living Star She/Her Posted March 23 Posted March 23 Storms, that's super impressive. I have no clue how you do that. The one and only ketek I've written turned out a little strange.
Ink and Embers Any pronouns Posted March 26 Posted March 26 On 3/23/2026 at 1:59 PM, Through The Living Ketek said: Once for it does. Please, everything is considered an existing conflict these days. Whose blamed? Who started this? Is this justified? Wars have been started over religion, of all excuses! What happens after every war? An instability, more fighting, tension, and strife. But is that important for the people that are powerful? The powers are that. People. That for importance that is but strife. And tension’s fight more unstable, a war ever after. Happening what excuses all of religion. Over starting beings have warring justifications; this is the start. Who blamed who? Daily, these conflicts exist. A consideration is everything. Please do it for once. Ooooo, awesome!!! The sentences flow together really really well!!!!
Through The Living Ketek He/Him/His Posted April 20 Author Posted April 20 On 3/26/2026 at 12:09 PM, Ink and Embers said: Ooooo, awesome!!! The sentences flow together really really well!!!! Thx! I wrote a paragraph and then wrote it backwards
Through The Living Ketek He/Him/His Posted April 20 Author Posted April 20 Half-lidded eyes flutter open at the crack of dawn, Half-awake men stagger up for battles not yet won, Half-broken souls reflect on foggy thoughts not gone, And yet, they carry on. Half-minded creatures scatter up many a tree, Half-shattered windows scatter light for all to see, Half-forgotten gods fight and struggle to be, And yet, they run free. Half-finished stories lie strewn with no sound, Half-legend treasures sit waiting to be found, Half-healthy foods are weighed by the pound, And yet, they stand their ground. Half-senseless dreams lie in the mind, Half-believed faiths have nothing to find, Half-planned days continue the grind, And yet, they leave nothing behind.
Through The Living Ketek He/Him/His Posted April 21 Author Posted April 21 Rising ash buries the broken city, while silent souls watch the falling ruin. Memories of light flicker, then die, as the screaming winds devour hope, turning all to void. For in the heart, love is a whisper, a faint dream of Tomorrow. Oh, Tomorrow's dream—faint a whisper, a love, heart that's in for. Void to all turning, hope devour winds screaming that as dying. Then, flickering light of memories. Ruin falling, the watching souls silent while, cities broken; the buried ash risen.
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