Looking for Beta readers for an OC fanfic, just a story set on Roshar.

[pureintonation she/her]

I’m not done writing the whole thing in prose. Trying to be painfully canon-compliant. Pre-Oathbringer. All OCs.

Follows an acrobat in a circus troupe. Stormlight-style flashbacks. Will end with a canon interaction at the end, probably. Or I may cut it off just before. 

My goal was to tell an original story within the framework set up by Brando Sando. 

I’ve been trying to use ChatGPT as an editor/Beta reader but I can tell it’s programmed to stroke my ego in a way a human never would. All the prose and ideas are mine, though. No AI. 
 

I have no experience with RPGs, I just have a really long commute to and from work and an unrelenting imagination. 

I want someone to tell me what my blindspots are, if the themes are resonating, what they think of my ideas, the direction, and point out anything that doesn’t make sense with canon.

Let me know and I will send you the Google doc.

So far, only the first two chapters are written in full prose. The rest are mostly chapter summaries (some very long and detailed, some short).

 

ok thanks!

[AltonicKeys he/him]

I'm interested in reading it, but it might take a while for me to get around to it... Idk how much feedback I can provide though, I just wanna read stuff  I do love canon-compatible fan works

[CoderDrag0n8 He/They]

3 hours ago, pureintonation said:

I’m not done writing the whole thing in prose. Trying to be painfully canon-compliant. Pre-Oathbringer. All OCs.

Follows an acrobat in a circus troupe. Stormlight-style flashbacks. Will end with a canon interaction at the end, probably. Or I may cut it off just before. 

My goal was to tell an original story within the framework set up by Brando Sando. 

I’ve been trying to use ChatGPT as an editor/Beta reader but I can tell it’s programmed to stroke my ego in a way a human never would. All the prose and ideas are mine, though. No AI. 
 

I have no experience with RPGs, I just have a really long commute to and from work and an unrelenting imagination. 

I want someone to tell me what my blindspots are, if the themes are resonating, what they think of my ideas, the direction, and point out anything that doesn’t make sense with canon.

Let me know and I will send you the Google doc.

So far, only the first two chapters are written in full prose. The rest are mostly chapter summaries (some very long and detailed, some short).

 

ok thanks!

*starts taking notes*

So, no AI. Thats good thats good *writes '+a bajillion points'*

I would love to read it! I might give the best advice, but I am fairly good at analyzing stuff!

[Through The Living Ash he/him]

On 1/13/2026 at 11:16 AM, pureintonation said:

I’m not done writing the whole thing in prose. Trying to be painfully canon-compliant. Pre-Oathbringer. All OCs.

Follows an acrobat in a circus troupe. Stormlight-style flashbacks. Will end with a canon interaction at the end, probably. Or I may cut it off just before. 

My goal was to tell an original story within the framework set up by Brando Sando. 

I’ve been trying to use ChatGPT as an editor/Beta reader but I can tell it’s programmed to stroke my ego in a way a human never would. All the prose and ideas are mine, though. No AI. 
 

I have no experience with RPGs, I just have a really long commute to and from work and an unrelenting imagination. 

I want someone to tell me what my blindspots are, if the themes are resonating, what they think of my ideas, the direction, and point out anything that doesn’t make sense with canon.

Let me know and I will send you the Google doc.

So far, only the first two chapters are written in full prose. The rest are mostly chapter summaries (some very long and detailed, some short).

 

ok thanks!

Sounds interesting! I would love to help review it! 

[Shatter He/Him]

On 1/13/2026 at 11:16 AM, pureintonation said:

I’m not done writing the whole thing in prose. Trying to be painfully canon-compliant. Pre-Oathbringer. All OCs.

Follows an acrobat in a circus troupe. Stormlight-style flashbacks. Will end with a canon interaction at the end, probably. Or I may cut it off just before. 

My goal was to tell an original story within the framework set up by Brando Sando. 

I’ve been trying to use ChatGPT as an editor/Beta reader but I can tell it’s programmed to stroke my ego in a way a human never would. All the prose and ideas are mine, though. No AI. 
 

I have no experience with RPGs, I just have a really long commute to and from work and an unrelenting imagination. 

I want someone to tell me what my blindspots are, if the themes are resonating, what they think of my ideas, the direction, and point out anything that doesn’t make sense with canon.

Let me know and I will send you the Google doc.

So far, only the first two chapters are written in full prose. The rest are mostly chapter summaries (some very long and detailed, some short).

 

ok thanks!

Sounds interesting. I can be a beta reader. :3