Collaborative storymaking
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Taking a little break from stuff I wrote in the past, this is something I wrote with my writing club just yesterday.
The premise is that everyone starts a story, then passes it along to the next person after 5 minutes, until it goes back around to the original person. This is the cool wacky formatted story that I started. Note that only the underlined text was written by me, and a \ symbol indicates a change in writer. Also the line spacing is weird, idk why.
Enter all complaints below:
“I hate springtime, I think we should get rid of it” (Anonymous)
“Daylight saving time doesn’t make any sense” (Anonymous)
Note. Anonymous complaints have been disabled, to prevent spam.
“I dislike that the complaints board has removed anonymous complaints” (John Complaint)
Note. Using a false name will result in a permanent ban
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“The staff are abusing their authority over the complaint board to manipulate public opinion” (George Roberts)
“I feel unsafe in the office. George was here yesterday and now he’s gone.” (Jessica Stallings)
Note. Don’t bring up missing staff or pay checks will be cut.
“You made the complaint board something to complain about, why are you silencing us?” (Kevin Barnes)
“We should be able to talk freely.” (Marcus Williamson)
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A sudden glitch occurs across all device, when it returned to normal, many people were removed.
Note. George Roberts, Jessica Stallings, Kevin Barnes, and Marcus Williamson were removed due to a violation of community guidelines.
“Something is wrong why are all the previous messages black out.” (Chester Dram)
Note. Black out text is a result of a server bug don’t worry user 5007894 we’re trying our best to fix it
“They really are trying to silence us all” (James White))
“How long will it take to fix the server bug?” (Brian Williams))
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Note. Stop using the complaint board as a chatroom. This is for complaints, not questions or discussion. The board will be locked for 24 hours for better regulations to be set
Complaint board Version 2.0
“The punishments doled out to James White and Brian Williams were not harsh enough” (Steve Smith)
Note. Thank you for the complaint. Your feedback is appreciated
“I think the day 1 board should be removed, as not to give a negative opinion of the staff to new users” (Chester Dram)
Note. This will be carried out. Your feedback is appreciated.
“Help.” (Help Me)
Note. Invalid complaint has been removed.
“As there are no more valid complaints to be made, this complaints board is unnecessary.” (The Staff)
Note. This is true. Your feedback is appreciated.
Corporate horror wasn't my original intention, but I love where this was taken. Reminds me of some SCP Foundation writing.
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