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  1. On 2/3/2017 at 0:29 PM, 1stBondsmith said:

    It is possible that the lights that wink out "that he hadn't noticed before" are the gas giants of the Roshar system, not all the Cosmere. Just a thought.

    What about his own sun dimming? In my mind that connected the lights winking out to other stars being extinguished

  2. I just finished a reread of The Way of Kings. Something in the last vision Dalinar receives stood out to me. He is obsessed through the whole book about uniting the High Princes, because of a vision he had. He has that same vision again at the end of the book but it is extended. In the extended version we learn that Honor is the one who sent them and that Odium has killed him. He is again told to "Unite Them". But who must he Unite?

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    [Honor] looked into the sky. “I don’t even know if anyone will ever see this. I am gone, you see.” Dalinar didn’t respond. He looked over the pinnacle’s sheer edge, down at a void, horrified. “This isn’t just about you either,” the figure said, raising his hand into the air. A light winked out in the sky, one that Dalinar hadn’t realized was there. Then another winked out as well. The sun seemed to be growing dimmer. “It’s about all of them,” [Honor] said. “I should have realized he’d come for me.”

    The figure still stared into the sky. “I leave this, because there must be something. A hope to discover. A chance that someone will find what to do. Do you wish to fight him?”

    “Someone must lead them.”

    “Someone must unite them.”

    “Someone must protect them.”

     

    Note: I removed Dalinar's thoughts and dialogue for clarity. 

    It is right after Honor points out the star systems being destroyed by Odium, while still looking at those star systems, that he tells Dalinar "Someone must unite them".

    Honor is not just saying Unite the High Princes, or the Knights Radiant, or even all of Roshar. Honor is thinking on a much, MUCH bigger scale.

    Unite the Cosmere!

     

    Spoiler

    Below is a sterilized transcription of the vision. I removed all of Dalinar's dialogue and thoughts so I could just look at the vision itself.

    He took a deep breath, opened his eyes, and found himself in a place of smoke. He turned about, wary. The sky was dark and he stood on a field of dull, bone-white rock, jagged and rough, extending in all directions. Off into eternity. Amorphous shapes made of curling grey smoke rose from the ground. Like smoke rings, only in other shapes. Here a chair. There a rockbud, with vines extended, curling to the sides and vanishing. Beside him appeared the figure of a man in uniform, silent and vaporous, rising lethargically toward the sky, mouth open. The shapes melted and distorted as they climbed higher, though they seemed to hold their forms longer than they should. It was unnerving, standing on the boundless plain, pure darkness above, smoke figures rising all around.

    He frowned, stepping back as the figure of a tree burst from the ground close to him.

    “You must unite them,” a powerful voice boomed.

    all around, causing the smoke figures to fuzz and distort.

    “Unite them. The sun approaches the horizon. The Everstorm comes. The True Desolation. The Night of Sorrows. You must prepare. Build of your people a fortress of strength and peace, a wall to resist the winds. Cease squabbling and unite.”

    The vision changed. He spun about, finding that he was still on an open plain of rock, but the normal sun was in the sky. The stone field looked like an ordinary one on Roshar.

    he began to walk, passing cracked boulders and broken bits of shale, pebbles and rocks. There were no plants, not even rockbuds. Just an empty landscape filled with broken stones. Eventually, he spotted a ridge. Getting to high ground felt like a good idea, though the hike seemed to take hours. The vision did not end. Time was often odd in these visions. He continued to hike up the side of the rock formation, wishing he had his Shardplate to strengthen him. Finally at the top, he walked over to the edge to look down below. And there he saw Kholinar, his home, the capital city of Alethkar. It had been destroyed. The beautiful buildings had been shattered. The windblades were cast down. There were no bodies, just broken stone.

    he could see the rubble of his own palace.

    “I cannot fight him any longer,” the voice said. Dalinar jumped, glancing to the side. A man stood there. He had dark skin and pure white hair. Tall, thick of chest but not massive, he wore exotic clothing of a strange cut: loose, billowing trousers and a coat that came down only to his waist. Both seemed made of gold.

    “You can see it there,” the figure said, pointing. “If you look closely. It begins in the distance.” Dalinar glanced in that direction,

    yes, something was happening. There was a shadow in the air, approaching. A wall of darkness. Like a highstorm, only wrong.

    “You’re probably wondering if this is a vision of the future.”

    The figure squinted at the horizon. “I cannot see the future completely. Cultivation, she is better at it than I. It’s as if the future is a shattering window. The further you look, the more pieces that window breaks into. The near future can be anticipated, but the distant future … I can only guess.”

    “That is what could happen,” the figure said, nodding into the distance. “It’s what I fear will happen. It’s what he wants. The True Desolation.” No, that wall in the air wasn’t a highstorm. It wasn’t rain making that enormous shadow, but blowing dust.

    The figure turned to him. “I am sorry to do this to you. By now I hope that what you’ve seen has given you a foundation to understand. But I can’t know for certain. I don’t know who you are, or how you have found your way here.”

    “Most of what I show you are scenes I have seen directly,” the figure said. “But some, such as this one, are born out of my fears. If I fear it, then you should too.” The land was trembling. The wall of dust was being caused by something. Something approaching. The ground was falling away. Dalinar gasped. The very rocks ahead were shattering, breaking apart, becoming dust. He backed away as everything began to shake, a massive earthquake accompanied by a terrible roar of dying rocks. He fell to the ground. There was an awful, grinding, terrifying moment of nightmare. The shaking, the destruction, the sounds of the land itself seeming to die. Then it was past. Dalinar breathed in and out before rising on unsteady legs. He and the figure stood on a solitary pinnacle of rock. A little section that—for some reason—had been protected. It was like a stone pillar a few paces wide, rising high into the air.

    Around it, the land was gone. Kholinar was gone. It had all fallen away into unplumbed darkness below. He felt vertigo, standing on the tiny bit of rock that—impossibly—remained.

    The figure looked about, sorrowful. “I can’t leave much. Just these few images, given to you. Whoever you are.”

    The figure looked into the sky. “I don’t even know if anyone will ever see this. I am gone, you see.” Dalinar didn’t respond. He looked over the pinnacle’s sheer edge, down at a void, horrified. “This isn’t just about you either,” the figure said, raising his hand into the air. A light winked out in the sky, one that Dalinar hadn’t realized was there. Then another winked out as well. The sun seemed to be growing dimmer. “It’s about all of them,” the figure said. “I should have realized he’d come for me.”

    The figure still stared into the sky. “I leave this, because there must be something. A hope to discover. A chance that someone will find what to do. Do you wish to fight him?

    “Someone must lead them.”

    “Someone must unite them.”

    “Someone must protect them.”

    The figure was silent for a moment. Then he spoke in a clear, crisp voice. “Life before death. Strength before weakness. Journey before destination. Speak again the ancient oaths and return to men the Shards they once bore.” He turned to Dalinar, meeting his eyes. “The Knights Radiant must stand again.”

    “Men must face them together,” the figure said, stepping up to Dalinar, placing a hand on his shoulder. “You cannot squabble as in times past. He’s realized that you, given time, will become your own enemies. That he doesn’t need to fight you. Not if he can make you forget, make you turn against one another. Your legends say that you won. But the truth is that we lost. And we are losing.”

    “I wish I could do more,” repeated the figure in gold. “You might be able to get him to choose a champion. He is bound by some rules. All of us are. A champion could work well for you, but it is not certain. And … without the Dawnshards … Well, I have done what I can. It is a terrible, terrible thing to leave you alone.”

    “I am … I was … God. The one you call the Almighty, the creator of mankind.” The figure closed his eyes. “And now I am dead. Odium has killed me. I am sorry.”

     

  3. The one thing in Steelheart that broke immersion for me was when the character with the southern accent (only read it once, so I forgot his name) used "y'all" to refer to a single person. I've lived in Georgia my whole life, and while I try not to use it, I know plenty of people who do, and hearing it used as "you" singular and plural drove me nuts. I mean... it has "all" in the word... it should be kinda obvious it's plural...

    I am sorry if I am showing my ignorance here, but if "y'all" is plural what is the purpose of the term "all y'all"  :D

  4. Crazy thought here. What if there is something similar to the spren crossing into the physical relm happening here? He is not quite all there yet, but over time will regain his mental aptitude.

     

    or...

     

    We don't even know if the Heralds are Human, splinters if Honor, or something else entirely. But they do live a really long time. Each of them have some "intent"... I'm just sayin'...

     

    EDIT: Clarification

  5. Something probably no one else is going to complain about, but it matters to me: the abuse of number 7. In alloy of law, most times random statistics are mentioned, the number 7 will be involved: 7 constables in 10 will miss a man at ten paces, wax was wounded 7 times, and a few other instances were something ahppened 7 times in 10, mostly quoted by marasi.

    This is not accidental: if asked a random number between one and then, most people will say 7. 1 and 9 are too close to the extremes and don't feel random, 5 is exactly in the middle, and 2, 4, 6, and 9 are too close to the above mentioned. So people having to choose a "random" number will generally pick 7, 3, and 8, in that order of likelyhood. If asked a 2-digit random number, they will mostly say 78 or 87 or 37.

    Knowing this, i tend to pay attention to random numbers. seeing that kind of pattern is a moderate blow to my suspension of disbelief, cause it keep pointing me that the story is fake. So I suggest brandon in the future use the random function of a calculator to get random numbers. Although I'm probably the only one who pay attention to that specific detail.

     

    Other than that, there are a few things I'm not really satisfied of, but they are all a matter of personal taste, nothing that could objectively be pointed as flawed.

    Have you thought that perhaps there is significance, beyond pseudo-randomness, in the number seven? 

  6. Well ... just replace "Sneaky" by "Snaky"  then ...

    I like it :)

     

    @morsk

    I see it as a fun exercise. and I agree on your interpretation of gibletish. however this:

     

     

    "Nonsense. Balderdash. Figgldygrak. Isn't it odd that gibberish words are often the sounds of other wrods, cut up and dismembered, then stitched into something like them-yet wholly unlike them at the same time?"

    It just screams, "Chop up these words up and rearrange them to make something new and unlike them!" Added that it seems so out of context and delivered by the lips of Hoid... 

     

    I am just saying that I would not put it past Brandon to drop a little Easter egg in that we will look at later and think, "How did I not see that?"

  7. After reading Hoser's post. It got me thinking of the role Szeth plays in all of this. I think you are on to something. Particularly this:

     

    Just to add to the pile. 

    • Whatever Szeth is being punished for is nearly coincident with the start of the death rattles, and a year before Gavilar was killed.
    • This quote from Szeth in the prologue seems to indicate much to me: "He had heard that the Voidbringers could hold it in perfectly.  But, then, did they even exist?  His punishment declared that they didn't.  His honor demanded that they did."

     

    Is it possible that whatever Szeth did triggered the beginning of the desolation countdown or did he take up an honorblade in response to a belief in the coming of a desolation?

     

    Now things seem to be coming together in my head. Let me see if I can paint the picture: 

    -The Honorblades are in Shinovar where the Shin people have been sworn to protect them.

    -The Shin people believe the Voidbringers to be defeated and the Desolations long since halted. Therefore, they detest the very idea of violence and war since the Heralds put to rest the need to continue such practice.

    -Szeth, a radical in Shin society that doesn't swallow this belief whole, pulls the sword from the stone in response to an event that makes him believe that the Voidbringers have returned.

    -When he refuses to return the blade they bind him (somehow) to an oath stone and cast him out of their society.

     

    Now this...

     

    "He had heard that the Voidbringers could hold it in perfectly.  But, then, did they even exist?  His punishment declared that they didn't.  His honor demanded that they did." 

    ...makes a lot more sense.

     

    note: I know it is wild speculation but, isn't that what we do?

     

     

    edit: punctuation...even though it is still pretty bad.

  8. I am not sure what advice to give on this one. I have read and reread this series a number of times while waiting for Brandon's epic conclusion. It wasn't until the 4th time through that I really struggled with these books. there is a lot in there of redeeming quality. I really appreciated the Perrin arc when I first read it. He was and still is the character I resonate the most with. There is a LOT of character growth that happens in these books for all of the characters. The endings were all great IMO. I think they are worth reading. 

     

    With that said however I feel like rereading some of these parts is as bad an idea as reliving Junior high. I grew a lot but... :wacko:

     

    So...I guess my advice would be, If you can read them with out too much suffering, read them. If it becomes a chore at least read the endings.

  9. Shard of Imitation: Everyone would look the same... Act the same, and your abilities would let you change to look and be like anyone else. Shame that everyone else is already you.

     

    *Gasps, looks at friend at the exact same time friend gasps and looks at me.* 

     

    Like a mirror..

    Sounds like the perfect shard to couple with the shard of redundancy.

  10. I looked at all three words "Nonsense. Balderdash. Figgldygrak" and came up with something interesting. 

     

    --Sneaky Heralds forging bad legends---

     

    I see this as a solid possibility. The Heralds creating legends of the Knights Radiant casting them as bad guys to keep the group from reforming. I think this is supported by Darkness's motives for killing those on the path to becoming Radiants. They (the Heralds) are trying to suppress another Desolation.  

     

    It makes me think...What other histories are they trying to suppress?

     

    I know its a stretch but this is fun! 

     

    EDIT: Apparently I used an extra 'e'. Whoops!

  11. My immediate thought is that the Expanse of Vapors refers to Mistborn's Scadrial due to the mists, which would mean the Expanse of Densities is either Elantris' Sel or Warbreaker's Nalthis. Neither makes any particular sense to me.

     

    Frankly, Expanse of Densities could be Scadrial too.

     

    For anyone who wants an image: http://stormlightarchive.wikia.com/wiki/Shadesmar

    Moogle already did...

     

    edit: and now I see that PorridgeBrick has also.

  12. I think that honor is a thing that cannot be gained in isolation. One can act honorably in isolation but they cannot be honored until those acts, performed in isolation, come to light and are viewed by the populace as honorable.

     

    So in one way I think that Bartbug is correct, that for the Nahel bond between a person and an Honor Spren to happen the person must be perceived as honorable. However, I am not sure that the evidence supports that this honor must be based in the cognitive relm. 

  13. The Shard of Truth is the one that can only be used by the True Seeker, isn't it?

     

    I almost down-voted you for the Sword of Truth reference but then I would have to down vote myself for having read it. 

     

    EDIT: I guess in the context of this thread that truly would be a bad idea, so...up-voted instead.

  14. I do not find this entirely convincing, as it is more the area between the poles that would be diminished, not the sky itself. I still find it more likely for Taldain to be behind "the Expanse of the Broken Sky".

    I am not entirely sure how things are manifest in shadesmar but I imagine clouds in one pole and not on the other. that would stand out quite starkly in my mind. 

     

    That being said, my gut does tell me that Scadrial is the Expanse of Densities. Though I can't justify it logically.

     

    EDIT: For clarification...My minds says Scadrial is EoBS but my gut says it is EoD.

  15. Something stood out to me when I was thinking about how Scadrial would appear in Shadesmar. I recall reading that places where there is no intelligence will not be represented in Shadsmar. In other words if there is empty space between worlds, Shadesmar sees it as no distance between the worlds. I imagine this would result in a continuity jump in the appearance of the surroundings. If I misinterpreted this idea please stop reading and correct me.  

     

    Now I realize things will have changed since Harmony was born but at least in the beginning of Mistborn life was only found on the north and south poles. So I am thinking to myself, "How would that appear in Shadesmar?" The North pole, a continuity shift, and then the South pole. Right?

     

    I present to you "Expanse of the Broken Sky" 

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