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  1. So in my creative writing class, we started our poetry unit today. My teacher gave us six pictures and had us write a poem about one of them. I did this picture:

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    So this is what I wrote, want help naming it, though:

     

    Crunch

    Snow is wet

    Owls almost loud

    Beam reflecting off the wet

    Beam reflecting off the snow

    Berry falls

    plop

    On head

    Branch drags behind

    Needles poke my wrist

    Why? I’m wearing gloves

    Cold wet seeps into boots

    Cold snow seeps into boots

    Rabbit sees, scampers away

    We were so close

    Now two sets of tracks

    Exist in the wet

    Exist in the snow

    In the cold

    Between the trees

    And the falling wet

    Snow

    Another step

    Another

    Crunch

     

    Sky is dark

    Mountains are not

    Stars are not

    Stars are rice on a black sheet

    Needles and berries are not

    Needles and berries are decorations on a tablecloth

    Snow is not

    Snow is blinding

    Snow is wet

    But bark is dark

    So is sky

     

    Grass pokes up

    Would sway,

    If not for the wet

    If not for the snow

    Cold and stiff, yes

    But strong

    Resilient

    Doesn’t care what cold says

    Doesn’t care what wet says

    Doesn’t care what snow says

    Doesn’t care what anything says

    Just grows

    Grows

    Grows

    Higher and higher

    Even through the wet

    Even through the snow

     

    Moon glows

    A spot of light

    In a sky of dark

    Almost enough to turn off the beam

    But not quite

    Still too dark

    Even if just a little

    Still too dark

     

    Wool itches

    Boots begin to cold

    In the wet

    In the snow

    Coat for my body

    Scarf for my face

    Hat for my ears

    Gloves for my hand

    Needle prick

    Boots shouldn’t be cold

    Boots should be warm

    I need new boots

    Thanks to the wet

    Thanks to the snow

     

    Nose turns red

    Red like berries

    So do ears

    So do cheeks

    Eyes feel frozen

    Frozen like wet

    Frozen like snow

    So does mouth

    So do fingers

    So do toes

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