No apologize, boots! Drama is good too!
Ene gasped, looking down at the blade in her stomach. She stumbled backward, letting the knife slide out of her, and tried to press her hands to the wound, but she was suddenly dizzy and her breaths came too fast and what if it had hit something and why had Salad done this and she was never, never going to find N. She sat down hard - well, more like fell over onto her side - and curled inward, putting pressure on the area of entry.
Were those deathspren she could see out of the corners of her eyes? She’d always dismissed them as a Rosharan myth. But something loomed, dark gray and shapeless and getting closer, and Ene couldn’t quite find enough air, and...the sky wasn’t supposed to be that color, was it? Oh, and now everything was changing colors and glowing. She wondered why, and reached out to catch one of the little balls of light that were floating around with a bloody hand, forgetting her injury. It didn’t hurt anymore.
She caught it, and it buzzed in her palm. She pulled it closer -
redgreenblueyellowsharpgoldsoftsilverwetcoldpainwarmlossanswersjoybloodfailureblackgonegonegone
Ene died.
Her body relaxed, hands falling to the ground, one dropping from her stomach and one from the air where she had gripped nothing. As it did this, she stood up, looking down at her unblemished torso, seeing no wounds and no color in her body. She was light gray all over, from her clothes to her eyes, though her corpse beneath her was colored normally.
“Aon,” a voice called, and she looked up automatically. A woman was beckoning to her.
“I go by Ene, actually, Aon is more of a surname, but don’t worry people make that mistake all the time...” She trailed off as the woman continued to gesture her forward. “Okay, I’m coming.”
The woman was a darker gray than her and looked middle-aged. “Come, Aon,” she said in a lilt that made it seem she was singing.
“I am,” Ene said uncertainly, walking to her. “Er, is this the afterlife?”
The woman smiled maternally. “No, Aon, this is...somewhere else.”
I think it’s my turn to apologize to you because what did I just write