Kyar BlaseHawk

Okay, one more thing. Does the group have to be focused on eventually defeating Lord Ruler, or can they just go of on their own, maybe attempting to eradicate Koloss, or trying to form their own sovereign nation?

First off, thank you so much fro that incredibly detailed post. What I feel didn't work the most was my creation of a story. I wanted to have my group work in Fadrex city, and that worked out fairly well, But what I ran into was a rather creatively lacking set of missions, or ar least I felt that way. So the specific advice you want to give about the story would pertain to how to make a better story.

Hello! Last summer a group of my friends got together, and attempted to play the Mistborn RPG. I was the Narrator, and they all played the charcters they had created. It was kind of a flop, and this may be simply self-depricating, but I feel as though that is largely my fault as new and inexperienced narrator, DM, GM, whatever title you want. i'm hoping that I may be able to find hep through this forum. If any of you have suggestions as to how to put together an effective story, or can point me to previous posts in the shard, it would be greatly appreciated! Thanks.