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Shallan and Jasnah is THE BEST FINGERS CROSSED - although while I can see Shallan having a crush on Jasnah, she's probably to young for her. Shallan x Kaladin almost feels too obvious? I'd rather see him with Syl. I could accept Jasnah x Hoid though.

I say this as someone with no knowledge of the previous chapters and no idea who these characters are: The frozen town was a really cool image and the concept was interesting for me. I like pretty nature things so it held for me, but I do think it needed a better hook. I feel like the fight was too sudden, too quick, and I wanted more background of the frozen child as well as more information about this dream stuff. Is it important at all? If there's something to establish then I would linger and let us know more. The bad guy is cool! Let him do more bad guy things! No idea what an espirt is. Is it some kind of magic soul bullet? For me the mistress was far too sudden and just "hi i'm here whaddup." She seems cool but the pacing is kind of weird and I feel like there needs to be more... resolution? with the town. I have NO idea what's going on with the blue slime and I feel like I'm missing a lot of context with Sofia. I hope this helps!

@bleeder oh okay i get it! i guess that makes sense @harambe hey now nothing wrong with that :B

@bleeder oh okay, would this generally be better for casual chatting?

there's a live action movie or something, right?

OH MAN Nico, Honoka, and Yoshiko are my first faves I really like Maki and Nozomi and Ruby and Chika too okay i love all of the girls but umi

sounds pretty... metal

yay anime! I've been watching rurouni kenshin and it's the best thing what is going to happen if i eat these internet cookies

Naw, my name is a Life is Strange reference, my real last name is pretty boring. Why would I not take cookies? :B cookies sound great *takes the cookie*

I went straight from ASoIaF to Mistborn and was very pleasantly surprised when the characters I liked got to live, ha

hi I'm rachael! a few really cool people awhile back told me to read mistborn and i fell in love with vin and elend and sazed AND NOW HERE I AM. (I got my roommate into it too and they've read every. single. book. they like to taunt me with "oh i don't know!" when I'm reading things they already have. ...not that I did that to them when they first read mistborn, of course.) I've read all of the first mistborn trilogy, stormlight, warbreaker, and perfect state. i also listen to writing excuses like every night. i'm a writer! i'm currently working on editing my NaNoWriMo novel, and have written an embarrassing amount of love live! fanfiction. Someday i'll get an MFA. Someday. anyways, nice to meet you all! i haven't been on a real forum in years so this is all new to me.

stormlight is an amazing experience and when i finished them it was like a hole was left in my life... so i know how you feel, just two years ago :B