lilpadfoot

I feel like the main character needs to be more afraid of these Holy Hunters. They have a weird description, and that's fine, I just do not feel the fear of them from Wren. Otherwise, I feel like it is a good idea, the writing does not keep me completely drawn to the story, but good enough that I may want to read more.

Every time I try to open the link it doesn't work from my iPad

Jasnah: Ravenclaw