I bet you could pull it off.Anywho, I brought it on the bus yesterday so here we go.
Ch 3
- "stop talking to your hat" oh my god im done already
- "there were a lot of things he didn't understand" WAYNE
- wayne stealing that poor guy's accent though. "Say something that starts with h" "huh?" "rusting wonderful."
- "bowl-head"
- hm, general note, the syntax changes a lot from wax to wayne. Like. Wayne's chapters use phrases like "that he did" and "that is was" its interesting, adds more character to the way he talks and his personality shines through even in the third person.
- THE APPLE
- back on syntax, marasi's sentences seem to be more complex.
- "you're like what, nine?" "she knows how long it is!" THIS COMPLETELY CAUGHT ME OFF GUARD AND I CRIED OH MY GOSH SANDERSON
- wax has had enough of their crap oh no
- he scared them off good
- "the best method of interrogation involves a drawer and someone's fingers" words of wisdom
- "she was not infatuated" are you totally SURE tho
- "nice work. But you're a total git i wanted to do that" me and my friends
- wax and wayne's banter is my favorite thing how i missed it so
- somethings about to go DOWN
- OHHH OHHH OH YOU GO GET EM
ch 4
- new syntax, wax seems to be in the middle.
- "it can make anyone into an allomancer" huh interesting
- "i think i found one of his teeth that's lucky isn't it!" WAYNE
- "this is not a sight for delicate stomachs" marasi: dude pls
- ohh a feruchemist this is going to get interesting
All in all this is great.