MrGinger128

Can anyone confirm if the links work?

For me personally all I want to write is the book i've started, and to get feedback/advice/motivation. And obviously i'm willing to do the same for others to get that.

I Absolutely would. My main issue is motivation (not just in writing!) and I've had trouble getting feedback from people I don't know in real life. So yeah sign me up. Absolutely. I'll upload my writing in PDF and .DOC. The Dark of Night - Paperback size.pdf The Dark of Night - Paperback size.docx

For someone who hasn't written anything before that is a massive compliment (Although I really couldn't get into Malazan haha) Thank you!

The attached is a PDF, i'm not sure if that's cool. If not let me know because i'm desperate for feedback, If I have to record it like a bloody audiobook I will at this point haha. The Dark of Night - Paperback size.pdf

A poor duelist compared to someone that's 300 years old, Best duelist in the world compared to 20-50 year olds. Even a bad 300 year old swordsman would beat a good 20 year old, Having literally centuries to practice makes a massive difference, You've seen every possible move 1000 times by this point.

Well they're mutants so I imagine nothing... Unpleasant looking lot in general.

Edited a tiny bit, any new feedback since I bumped it from 5 to 30-odd pages? having trouble getting people to read it that I don't know.

I'm shamelessly bumping since i'm finding it difficult to continue ( Haven't touched it in a while)

Thank you Rick Astley, I knew you wouldn't give me up!

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Hi Guys, it's been a LONG time but I have an update. Please see the attached. There may be story elements that contradict, I've yet to correct some errors, focusing on getting the story going a bit. Please let me know what you think Also I've just changed the formatting to fit with what i've been told is standard manuscript formatting, how is it for you guys? Thanks again. Daniel. EDIT - Changed attached to match updated product. + added PDF The Dark of Night - Paperback size.docx The Dark of Night - Paperback size.pdf

Anyone else have anything to add? I'm curious to see who else enjoyed it as much as I did!

Hi Tyson! Thank you! I'll keep working at it and try to fix some of those points As for the hook one Does that hook need to come in the first chapter? It'll probably be end of chapter 2 before things start to get going! Thanks, Daniel

Hi Guys, I've not had a chance to write as much as i'd like, but i've re-written a fair chunk of what I started with and thought i'd give it to you fine people for a look! Thank you all again for the fantastic words. I'm really hoping I can turn this into something. Anyway, it's attached and I've marked where i've gotten to. Thank you. Daniel The Dark of Night.docx