First Poem

[Kered he/him]

It was suggested to be for multiple reasons to attempt poetry. Never thought to try for what I assume is the main reasons why other people don't think to try it. I was told that it helps you develop stronger writing and feeling inside that writing. Not gunna say what it's about, would like to see what you guys think about it before I do that. That is if anyone reads it haha.  So here goes nothing.

Into the deepness

Deeper into thought

Into the deepness

Deeper still sought 

Into the deepness

Deeper in can yet be fought

Into the deepness

It can still be caught

[uglyllama]

I like it!  My first thought is that your topic is sleep.  Not sure if that's what you intended though.