Picture hook

[Kered he/him]

So I've checked a couple pages in this section, and haven't seen a topic really like this.

 

My girlfriends professor for one of creative writting electives has them do this exercise at least once a week. It's easy and simple, and for me personally it has helped me improve my writting. So what you do is grab an image, any image, as long is kinda powerfully resonates with you in some way. Then you write a hook sentence that goes along with the image.

It's a pretty quick trick to help you improve and more often than not its fun to see what you and other people come up with. Which I thought was a good idea for this forum.

I'll start it off. Which means we're going to start off on a really bad note.

"A great and terrible power exists, it exists at the Eternal Kingdoms"

 

Edited October 29, 2016 by KereDerek

[Darkness Ascendant he/him]

 

It exists at the heart of the Eternity Tower.

Edited October 30, 2016 by Dankness Ascendant

[Spoolofwhool]

What brings a Child of Fire to the depths of the Drowned Sea?

[Darkness Ascendant he/him]

18 minutes ago, Spoolofwhool said:

What brings a Child of Fire to the depths of the Drowned Sea?

Fire boy and Water Girl

[Spoolofwhool]

8 minutes ago, Dankness Ascendant said:

Fire boy and Water Girl

Then he dies and becomes a water boy.

[Kered he/him]

"Everyone remembers the day the moons collided, the day that magic died"

[Spoolofwhool]

"I lived to see myself the villain, for regret was too precious a burden to lose to death."

[Darkness Ascendant he/him]

"Once in the bowels of the Earth, a great magick once resided"

[Kered he/him]

"With malice and sorrow in his heart, he destroyed the hope of humanity"

[Quiver he/him]

It was a holy place, and he was a holy man. Today, they came to blaspheme. 

[Darkness Ascendant he/him]

"The last blade of Erungal was given to the keeper of the wood"

[Kered he/him]

Everyone remembers the day the Angel's of Rayen fell.

[Kered he/him]

The Pillars of Creation were tainted, tainted by the fall of Azmor. 

[Spoolofwhool]

On 11/10/2016 at 11:54 AM, KereDerek said:

Everyone remembers the day the Angel's of Rayen fell.

Love Simurgh.

[Kered he/him]

10 hours ago, Spoolofwhool said:

Love Simurgh.

Haha, didn't think anyone was going to catch that. 

[Spoolofwhool]

1 hour ago, KereDerek said:

Haha, didn't think anyone was going to catch that. 

I caught it when you originally posted it, but I got distracted after verifying that the picture was Simurgh by the Worm wiki page.

[Quiver he/him]

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A solitary merchant on the shifting road was unusual. A salamancer more so. Someone with white hair who was both was practically unheard of. 
That was, of course, the way Hawra liked it. It gave her impact.

Edited November 22, 2016 by Quiver

[Darkness Ascendant he/him]

And so the hunt continued.

[Lindel he/him]

 

"They created weapons they didn't understand, unleashed power that could not be contained."

"Few can forget the day the Travelers grew. . . hungry. They day they began to feed."

Edited November 28, 2016 by Lindel
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[Kered he/him]

"The God Dragon, both are salvation and destruction."