Keteks Anyone?

[Keteᛕ He/Him/His]

Hi guys. I'm new here but I'm a HUGE Stormlight Archives fan and a Cosmere fan overall! I joined recently to look at some keteks and found that I myself am decent at it too! 

People have feelings

Passion, anticipation, happiness

We all have them.

Defines us, emotions.

Truly owned by who?

The feeler.

But is it?

No.

It is but the feeler who’s owned by true emotions.

We’re defined.

They have all our happiness.

Anticipating passionately.

Feelings have people.

Edited January 10 by Kaladist

[Keteᛕ He/Him/His]

Three.

Two.

One.

Countdowns end.

Stop. Never further.

Going then gone.

Now, but yet…

Done.

Not. Done. Yet.

But now…

Gone then going further.

Never stop.

End countdowns.

One. 

Two.

Three.

[Keteᛕ He/Him/His]

Restrictions.

No freedom, they proclaim.

They rule living.

We yearn.

They make us impossibilities.

But, impossibly…

We make them yearn us.

Live.

Rule them.

Proclaim them free.

No restrictions.

Push yourself.

Feeling tired?

Continue; you will get there.

Almost there.

Only success comes to those for trying

For awards will come.

I promise.

I come willingly.

Awards for trying, for those to come.

Success only there.

Almost there.

Go, will yourself.

Continue, tired.

Feel yourself push.

[First of the Tide He/him]

Hello, and welcome to the Shard! I'd Suggest making an Intro Post to tell us what you have and haven't read and to introduce yourself. I'd also suggest checking out Treamayne's Sharder FAQ. 

Also, double posting is generally discouraged, and editing the original post is prefered (three dots in the top corner).

With that out of the way: Do you want any critique? I haven't Keteked in a while, but I might could give some small things.

edit: I have now gone and Ketek'd: 

Spoiler

Life.

Perfect and Complete.

Beauty Vivid Yet Chained.

Yet Vivid Beauty.

Complete and Perfect Life.

 

Death of Time

For Waiting, Gone is All Time.

Of Ending, The Stop Comes.

Savior.

A Savior Comes.

Stop the Ending of Time?

 All is Gone. Waiting for Time of Death.

 

Time, Newly Begun.

Living Beautifully.

Unchaining Belief.

Believing, Unchained.

Beautiful Life, Began Anew, Timely.

It's a haiku-Inspired set of 3 Keteks (although technically #2 isn't a Ketek, it's a Ketetek) With the contrast emphasized between the 1st and 3rd, rather than the beginning and end of the same ketek. I tried to emphasize this with the first being a 'perfect ketek' (word for word) and the third being a 'simple Ketek' (word forms allowed)

my levels of ketek, if you're interested

Spoiler

super Ketek:more than a ketek, like each section is it's own ketek, or the number of words in the ketek is a palindrome, etc.

perfect ketek: exact, word-for-word (my love was the sun-> sun the was love my)

simple Ketek: exact, with wordforms (most of the ones in-story)(my love was the sun->sun the was lover my)

improper Ketek: wordforms, and floating filler/article words (my love was the sun->the sun was lover my)

dirty Ketek: wordforms, and phrases taken as whole rather than words (my love was the sun->the sun was my lover)

notaketeks: what it sounds like (my love was the sun->and so she died a flaming death)

 

 

 

Edited January 12 by First of the Tide

[Keteᛕ He/Him/His]

great keteks! I'm sorry if I got out on a bad start, but I just wanted to get myself out there and the Intro Post threads were very confusing.

Explain actual science.
Do what?
Equations to all it wants for.
Search data and facts.
Just no complete answers.
It questions religion to extremities.
To religious questions; it answers completely none.
Just facts and data.
Searching for wanting.
It all equates to:
What does science actually explain?
 

[Keteᛕ He/Him/His]

this is by far the BEST KETEK IV'E EVER WRITTEN:

 

 

La la la.

 

 

 

Just kidding!

 

 

Newly broken skies scarred the running winds’ determination.
The togetherness be broken, the maker of that conflict.
The resolution was standing under great, impossible burdens.
With men seeing gods near death.
Dark, made powerful, combined haste with feelings more to come.
Had they drifted closer, spirits might have lived.
They then tried..
And, enemies all over them, won them over.
All enemies.
And, trying, then…
Their lives had mightiness.
Spirits closely drifting.
They had come to more feelings.
Hastily combined power made darkness die.
Near-gods saw men with burdens impossibly great.
Understanding was resolving the conflict, that of making.
The broken being together;
The determined Windrunner.
The scarred Skybreaker.
Anew.