Kansas's Song Attempts

[Kansas Stormcursed he/him]

Just now, VieB13 said:

Dude that is FIRE. Have you recorded any of these??? Bc you should 

Oh that’s really good but also disconcerting. You doing alright there?

*hugs*

*hugs back*

Thanks. Yeah, I'm okay.

I could have sworn it was you I replied to, but anyway no cause I haven't worked on singing yet. Saving that for college, trying to work one instrument at a time.

 

[Vielence She/Her]

2 minutes ago, Kansas Stormcursed said:

*hugs back*

Thanks. Yeah, I'm okay.

I could have sworn it was you I replied to, but anyway no cause I haven't worked on singing yet. Saving that for college, trying to work one instrument at a time.

 

Good. Okay is better than not. 
 

Mmmm. Yeah I see your logic

[Kansas Stormcursed he/him]

Ok, two months later and I have a couple of things, I have to figure out which ones I haven't posted in here

In the meantime: as my listening becomes more sea-shanty based, I've been working on this. I'm thinking steady beat if I can find somebody with a kickdrum, and a flute (if I can find somebody with a flute, or learn it cause it's on my list) to trace the vocal pattern. Idk what I'll do with the guitar

Spoiler

The breeze in my hair as I soar through the air

Sparks a high that twists and turns

The arc that I trace meets the ground and then

For the air my heart it yearns

 

The wind it is free and it calls to me

As I walk upon the ground

I live for the times when I leave the ground

And the wind is all around

I'd love any feedback, especially on rhyme scheme. The first lines of the verses wound up with middle rhyme or whatever it's called (first half of the line rhyming with the second half), and I'd like to do that with the 3rd lines of each as well but can't really work out how

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16 hours ago, Ookla the Kansan said:

Ok, two months later and I have a couple of things, I have to figure out which ones I haven't posted in here

In the meantime: as my listening becomes more sea-shanty based, I've been working on this. I'm thinking steady beat if I can find somebody with a kickdrum, and a flute (if I can find somebody with a flute, or learn it cause it's on my list) to trace the vocal pattern. Idk what I'll do with the guitar

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The breeze in my hair as I soar through the air

Sparks a high that twists and turns

The arc that I trace meets the ground and then

For the air my heart it yearns

 

The wind it is free and it calls to me

As I walk upon the ground

I live for the times when I leave the ground

And the wind is all around

I'd love any feedback, especially on rhyme scheme. The first lines of the verses wound up with middle rhyme or whatever it's called (first half of the line rhyming with the second half), and I'd like to do that with the 3rd lines of each as well but can't really work out how

New song!!!!

I LOVE it!!!! I feel like I can actively hear it being sung!!!! It feels like a sky sea shanty. Personally I think the third lines are good as they are because they make it feel more rhythmic, but then again I don't know loads about sea shanties.

It's awesome!!!!

[Kansas Stormcursed he/him]

2 hours ago, Ookla the Perpetually Disc said:

New song!!!!

I LOVE it!!!! I feel like I can actively hear it being sung!!!! It feels like a sky sea shanty. Personally I think the third lines are good as they are because they make it feel more rhythmic, but then again I don't know loads about sea shanties.

It's awesome!!!!

Thanks!

The third lines are honestly just me being nitpicky and OCD

 

 

Update: I got a chorus too, and some ideas for the second half

Spoiler

||The breeze in my hair as I soar through the air

Sparks a high that twists and turns

The arc that I trace meets the ground and then

For the air my heart it yearns

 

The wind it is free and it calls to me

As I walk upon the ground

I live for the times when I meet the sky

And the wind is all around

 

The earth it is tough and it holds me up

But the sky it sets me free

The sea’s frantic fray holds a love for play

But the sky just lets me be

 

I am **kin** to the **wind** and I **know her name**

For the **wind** she is **kin** to **me**

And when **all** else **fails** and the **world falls down**

I know **she** will **stay** by **me**||

I'm too lazy rn to delete the notations, this was copied from Discord. Word in ** ** are emphasized by kickdrum (or just me banging on the table, since that came out well in test recording)

[Kansas Stormcursed he/him]

Update: I finished it!

Edit: I changed it!

Title: Kin to the Wind

Spoiler

The breeze in my hair as I soar through the air

Sparks a high that twists and turns

The arc that I trace meets the ground and then

For the air my heart it yearns

 

The wind it is free and it calls to me

As I walk upon the ground

I live for the times when I meet the sky

And the wind is all around

 

I am kin to the wind and I know her name

For the wind she is kin to me

And when all else fails and the world falls down

I know she will bring me free

 

The earth it is tough and it holds me up

But the sky it sets me free

The sea’s frantic fray drives me through the day

But the sky it plays with glee

 

I am kin to the wind and I know her name

For the wind she is kin to me

And when all else fails and the world falls down

I know she will bring me free

 

The spring's soft breeze is crisp and clean

In its wake the grass grows green

The wind in the summer is calm and beats

Away my worries

 

The autumn breeze blows the leaves from the trees

Like the problems from my soul

The winter wind cuts like a sharpened sword

The rot that creeps into my mind

 

I am kin to the wind and I know her name

For the wind she is kin to me

And when all else fails and the world falls down

I know she will bring me free

 

The wind in my hair as I soar through the air

Sparks a high that twists and turns

When the arc that I trace meets the ground I brace

 For my issues they return

 

I am kin to the wind and I know her name

For the wind she is kin to me

And when all else fails and the world falls down

I know she will bring me free

 

I am kin to the wind and I know her name

For the wind she is kin to me

And when all else fails and the world falls down

I know she will bring me free

 

Edited December 9, 2025 by Ookla the Kansan

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On 12/9/2025 at 3:09 AM, Ookla the Kansan said:

Update: I finished it!

Edit: I changed it!

Title: Kin to the Wind

  Hide contents

The breeze in my hair as I soar through the air

Sparks a high that twists and turns

The arc that I trace meets the ground and then

For the air my heart it yearns

 

The wind it is free and it calls to me

As I walk upon the ground

I live for the times when I meet the sky

And the wind is all around

 

I am kin to the wind and I know her name

For the wind she is kin to me

And when all else fails and the world falls down

I know she will bring me free

 

The earth it is tough and it holds me up

But the sky it sets me free

The sea’s frantic fray drives me through the day

But the sky it plays with glee

 

I am kin to the wind and I know her name

For the wind she is kin to me

And when all else fails and the world falls down

I know she will bring me free

 

The spring's soft breeze is crisp and clean

In its wake the grass grows green

The wind in the summer is calm and beats

Away my worries

 

The autumn breeze blows the leaves from the trees

Like the problems from my soul

The winter wind cuts like a sharpened sword

The rot that creeps into my mind

 

I am kin to the wind and I know her name

For the wind she is kin to me

And when all else fails and the world falls down

I know she will bring me free

 

The wind in my hair as I soar through the air

Sparks a high that twists and turns

When the arc that I trace meets the ground I brace

 For my issues they return

 

I am kin to the wind and I know her name

For the wind she is kin to me

And when all else fails and the world falls down

I know she will bring me free

 

I am kin to the wind and I know her name

For the wind she is kin to me

And when all else fails and the world falls down

I know she will bring me free

 

I love it!!!!!  It really sounds like a sea shanty. It's such a beautiful song!!!!

[Kansas Stormcursed he/him]

20 hours ago, Ookla the Perpetually Disc said:

I love it!!!!!  It really sounds like a sea shanty. It's such a beautiful song!!!!

Thanks!

[Honors Spectral Image She/her]

On 12/8/2025 at 9:09 PM, Ookla the Kansan said:

Update: I finished it!

Edit: I changed it!

Title: Kin to the Wind

  Hide contents

The breeze in my hair as I soar through the air

Sparks a high that twists and turns

The arc that I trace meets the ground and then

For the air my heart it yearns

 

The wind it is free and it calls to me

As I walk upon the ground

I live for the times when I meet the sky

And the wind is all around

 

I am kin to the wind and I know her name

For the wind she is kin to me

And when all else fails and the world falls down

I know she will bring me free

 

The earth it is tough and it holds me up

But the sky it sets me free

The sea’s frantic fray drives me through the day

But the sky it plays with glee

 

I am kin to the wind and I know her name

For the wind she is kin to me

And when all else fails and the world falls down

I know she will bring me free

 

The spring's soft breeze is crisp and clean

In its wake the grass grows green

The wind in the summer is calm and beats

Away my worries

 

The autumn breeze blows the leaves from the trees

Like the problems from my soul

The winter wind cuts like a sharpened sword

The rot that creeps into my mind

 

I am kin to the wind and I know her name

For the wind she is kin to me

And when all else fails and the world falls down

I know she will bring me free

 

The wind in my hair as I soar through the air

Sparks a high that twists and turns

When the arc that I trace meets the ground I brace

 For my issues they return

 

I am kin to the wind and I know her name

For the wind she is kin to me

And when all else fails and the world falls down

I know she will bring me free

 

I am kin to the wind and I know her name

For the wind she is kin to me

And when all else fails and the world falls down

I know she will bring me free

 

It’s giving Kaladin in WaT

But yah it sounds great if you want me to write a horn or violin part I can and I have friends who play electric bass drums and electric guitar that might record something if you want

[Kansas Stormcursed he/him]

I was up 'til like 1:30 last night writing this so I'm really tired but I needed to get it written down and out of my head

Title: Bleed Out

Spoiler

There's red on the ground
And red all around
And I greet the damned
With a smile on my face

The red it grows wide-
-er, some of it's mine
Someone meets my eyes
I know I go with grace

This world is violent and it's hateful
It will tear you and will break you
What can folks like you and me do
In the face of its fury
I know some people who have picked the
Spot they want to be their last, a
Place they'd fade out and they'd bleed out
In a great blaze of glory

I've heard this is dark
And breaks people's hearts
The end of the arc
Is a curse to foresee

If it will be true
I can't say to you
Known since 'twenty-two
It lies near my family

This world is violent and it's hateful
It will tear you and will break you
What can folk like you and me do
In the face of its fury
I know some people who have picked the
Spot they want to be their last, a
Place they'd fade out and they'd bleed out
In a great blaze of glory

The world it is messed
Up, we're on the edge
Of time of the reck-
-oning change needs to pass

No God up in Hea-
-ven sends our salva-
-tion we are the a-
-gents of change—time to act

This world is violent and it's hateful
It will tear you and will break you
What can dolks like you and me do
In the face of its fire
I've had my bleed out spot since 'twenty-
Two though I hope that I won't need
It but if it will turn that damn Wheel
I'll go out like a fighter

The red it grows wide-
-er, some of it's mine
Someone meets my eyes
As I smile to his face

For eyes like the sea
And love that won't leave
For him I will plead
Make this world a better place

 

Edited January 13 by Kansas Stormcursed

[Honors Spectral Image She/her]

53 minutes ago, Kansas Stormcursed said:

I was up 'til like 1:30 last night writing this so I'm really tired but I needed to get it written down and out of my head

Title: Bleed Out

  Hide contents

There's red on the ground
And red all around
And I greet the damned
With a smile on my face

The red it grows wide-
-er, some of it's mine
Someone meets my eyes
I know I go with grace

This world is violent and it's hateful
It will tear you and will break you
What can a simple man like me do
In the face of its fury
I know some people who have picked the
Spot they want to be their last, a
Place they'd fade out and they'd bleed out
In a great blaze of glory

I've heard this is dark
And breaks people's hearts
The end of the arc
Is a curse to foresee

If it will be true
I can't say to you
Known since 'twenty-two
It lies near my family

This world is violent and it's hateful
It will tear you and will break you
What can a simple man like me do
In the face of its fury
I know some people who have picked the
Spot they want to be their last, a
Place they'd fade out and they'd bleed out
In a great blaze of glory

The world it is messed
Up, we're on the edge
Of time of the reck-
-oning change needs to pass

No God up in Hea-
-ven sends our salva-
-tion we are the a-
-gents of change—time to act

This world is violent and it's hateful
It will tear you and will break you
What can a simple man like me do
In the face of its fire
I've had my bleed out spot since 'twenty-
Two though I hope that I won't need
It but if it will turn that damn Wheel
I'll go out like a fighter

The red it grows wide-
-er, some of it's mine
Someone meets my eyes
As I smile to his face

For eyes like the sea
And love that won't leave
For him I will plead
Make this world a better place

 

Very nice

[Akimikoisthecutest]

12 hours ago, Kansas Stormcursed said:

I was up 'til like 1:30 last night writing this so I'm really tired but I needed to get it written down and out of my head

Title: Bleed Out

  Hide contents

There's red on the ground
And red all around
And I greet the damned
With a smile on my face

The red it grows wide-
-er, some of it's mine
Someone meets my eyes
I know I go with grace

This world is violent and it's hateful
It will tear you and will break you
What can a simple man like me do
In the face of its fury
I know some people who have picked the
Spot they want to be their last, a
Place they'd fade out and they'd bleed out
In a great blaze of glory

I've heard this is dark
And breaks people's hearts
The end of the arc
Is a curse to foresee

If it will be true
I can't say to you
Known since 'twenty-two
It lies near my family

This world is violent and it's hateful
It will tear you and will break you
What can a simple man like me do
In the face of its fury
I know some people who have picked the
Spot they want to be their last, a
Place they'd fade out and they'd bleed out
In a great blaze of glory

The world it is messed
Up, we're on the edge
Of time of the reck-
-oning change needs to pass

No God up in Hea-
-ven sends our salva-
-tion we are the a-
-gents of change—time to act

This world is violent and it's hateful
It will tear you and will break you
What can a simple man like me do
In the face of its fire
I've had my bleed out spot since 'twenty-
Two though I hope that I won't need
It but if it will turn that damn Wheel
I'll go out like a fighter

The red it grows wide-
-er, some of it's mine
Someone meets my eyes
As I smile to his face

For eyes like the sea
And love that won't leave
For him I will plead
Make this world a better place

 

I approve of this

[Ink and Embers Any pronouns]

On 1/12/2026 at 2:06 PM, Kansas Stormcursed said:

I was up 'til like 1:30 last night writing this so I'm really tired but I needed to get it written down and out of my head

Title: Bleed Out

  Hide contents

There's red on the ground
And red all around
And I greet the damned
With a smile on my face

The red it grows wide-
-er, some of it's mine
Someone meets my eyes
I know I go with grace

This world is violent and it's hateful
It will tear you and will break you
What can a simple man like me do
In the face of its fury
I know some people who have picked the
Spot they want to be their last, a
Place they'd fade out and they'd bleed out
In a great blaze of glory

I've heard this is dark
And breaks people's hearts
The end of the arc
Is a curse to foresee

If it will be true
I can't say to you
Known since 'twenty-two
It lies near my family

This world is violent and it's hateful
It will tear you and will break you
What can a simple man like me do
In the face of its fury
I know some people who have picked the
Spot they want to be their last, a
Place they'd fade out and they'd bleed out
In a great blaze of glory

The world it is messed
Up, we're on the edge
Of time of the reck-
-oning change needs to pass

No God up in Hea-
-ven sends our salva-
-tion we are the a-
-gents of change—time to act

This world is violent and it's hateful
It will tear you and will break you
What can a simple man like me do
In the face of its fire
I've had my bleed out spot since 'twenty-
Two though I hope that I won't need
It but if it will turn that damn Wheel
I'll go out like a fighter

The red it grows wide-
-er, some of it's mine
Someone meets my eyes
As I smile to his face

For eyes like the sea
And love that won't leave
For him I will plead
Make this world a better place

 

Awesome!!!!!!!

[Vielence She/Her]

On 12/7/2025 at 7:33 PM, Kansas Stormcursed said:

Ok, two months later and I have a couple of things, I have to figure out which ones I haven't posted in here

In the meantime: as my listening becomes more sea-shanty based, I've been working on this. I'm thinking steady beat if I can find somebody with a kickdrum, and a flute (if I can find somebody with a flute, or learn it cause it's on my list) to trace the vocal pattern. Idk what I'll do with the guitar

  Hide contents

The breeze in my hair as I soar through the air

Sparks a high that twists and turns

The arc that I trace meets the ground and then

For the air my heart it yearns

 

The wind it is free and it calls to me

As I walk upon the ground

I live for the times when I leave the ground

And the wind is all around

I'd love any feedback, especially on rhyme scheme. The first lines of the verses wound up with middle rhyme or whatever it's called (first half of the line rhyming with the second half), and I'd like to do that with the 3rd lines of each as well but can't really work out how

I love this. I actually wrote something similar like 4 years ago... I'll have to see if I can find it lol. 

On 12/8/2025 at 1:54 PM, Kansas Stormcursed said:

Thanks!

The third lines are honestly just me being nitpicky and OCD

 

 

Update: I got a chorus too, and some ideas for the second half

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||The breeze in my hair as I soar through the air

Sparks a high that twists and turns

The arc that I trace meets the ground and then

For the air my heart it yearns

 

The wind it is free and it calls to me

As I walk upon the ground

I live for the times when I meet the sky

And the wind is all around

 

The earth it is tough and it holds me up

But the sky it sets me free

The sea’s frantic fray holds a love for play

But the sky just lets me be

 

I am **kin** to the **wind** and I **know her name**

For the **wind** she is **kin** to **me**

And when **all** else **fails** and the **world falls down**

I know **she** will **stay** by **me**||

I'm too lazy rn to delete the notations, this was copied from Discord. Word in ** ** are emphasized by kickdrum (or just me banging on the table, since that came out well in test recording)

This is just getting better 

On 12/8/2025 at 9:09 PM, Kansas Stormcursed said:

Update: I finished it!

Edit: I changed it!

Title: Kin to the Wind

  Hide contents

The breeze in my hair as I soar through the air

Sparks a high that twists and turns

The arc that I trace meets the ground and then

For the air my heart it yearns

 

The wind it is free and it calls to me

As I walk upon the ground

I live for the times when I meet the sky

And the wind is all around

 

I am kin to the wind and I know her name

For the wind she is kin to me

And when all else fails and the world falls down

I know she will bring me free

 

The earth it is tough and it holds me up

But the sky it sets me free

The sea’s frantic fray drives me through the day

But the sky it plays with glee

 

I am kin to the wind and I know her name

For the wind she is kin to me

And when all else fails and the world falls down

I know she will bring me free

 

The spring's soft breeze is crisp and clean

In its wake the grass grows green

The wind in the summer is calm and beats

Away my worries

 

The autumn breeze blows the leaves from the trees

Like the problems from my soul

The winter wind cuts like a sharpened sword

The rot that creeps into my mind

 

I am kin to the wind and I know her name

For the wind she is kin to me

And when all else fails and the world falls down

I know she will bring me free

 

The wind in my hair as I soar through the air

Sparks a high that twists and turns

When the arc that I trace meets the ground I brace

 For my issues they return

 

I am kin to the wind and I know her name

For the wind she is kin to me

And when all else fails and the world falls down

I know she will bring me free

 

I am kin to the wind and I know her name

For the wind she is kin to me

And when all else fails and the world falls down

I know she will bring me free

 

100% approve. It feels like it could be a duet....

On 1/12/2026 at 8:06 AM, Kansas Stormcursed said:

I was up 'til like 1:30 last night writing this so I'm really tired but I needed to get it written down and out of my head

Title: Bleed Out

  Reveal hidden contents

There's red on the ground
And red all around
And I greet the damned
With a smile on my face

The red it grows wide-
-er, some of it's mine
Someone meets my eyes
I know I go with grace

This world is violent and it's hateful
It will tear you and will break you
What can folks like you and me do
In the face of its fury
I know some people who have picked the
Spot they want to be their last, a
Place they'd fade out and they'd bleed out
In a great blaze of glory

I've heard this is dark
And breaks people's hearts
The end of the arc
Is a curse to foresee

If it will be true
I can't say to you
Known since 'twenty-two
It lies near my family

This world is violent and it's hateful
It will tear you and will break you
What can folk like you and me do
In the face of its fury
I know some people who have picked the
Spot they want to be their last, a
Place they'd fade out and they'd bleed out
In a great blaze of glory

The world it is messed
Up, we're on the edge
Of time of the reck-
-oning change needs to pass

No God up in Hea-
-ven sends our salva-
-tion we are the a-
-gents of change—time to act

This world is violent and it's hateful
It will tear you and will break you
What can dolks like you and me do
In the face of its fire
I've had my bleed out spot since 'twenty-
Two though I hope that I won't need
It but if it will turn that damn Wheel
I'll go out like a fighter

The red it grows wide-
-er, some of it's mine
Someone meets my eyes
As I smile to his face

For eyes like the sea
And love that won't leave
For him I will plead
Make this world a better place

 

This. Is. FIRE. Do you have a recording of this? If so, can I have it? 

[Kansas Stormcursed he/him]

3 hours ago, VieB13 said:

I love this. I actually wrote something similar like 4 years ago... I'll have to see if I can find it lol. 

This is just getting better 

100% approve. It feels like it could be a duet....

This. Is. FIRE. Do you have a recording of this? If so, can I have it? 

Thanks! Ooh that would be cool

...

Yes

I can send it to you, but know that my singing is crap

[Vielence She/Her]

On 1/17/2026 at 2:17 PM, Kansas Stormcursed said:

Thanks! Ooh that would be cool

...

Yes

I can send it to you, but know that my singing is crap

I do not care.

Yes, please send it to me lol

Edited January 18 by VieB13

[Kansas Stormcursed he/him]

Incomplete

Working title: Contradictory.

Alternate possibilities: facechanger, don't know

Spoiler

I'm told this is the time to decide who I want to be

But I've just spent it tryna [phonetic for rhythm] be the man that others see

Each hour of the day I change my shape my lies my self

I'll wear a different guise between one second and the next

A thousamd different molds mark every version that they see

All stored inside my head, all catalogued and kept in reach

 

I'm a face-changer

Doppelganger

None of them is me

When I look in the

Mirror I don't

Know the man I see

I am one, I'm the

Other, I am

Somewhere in between

I can't keep shifting

It's so goddamn

Contradictory

 

[Ink and Embers Any pronouns]

11 minutes ago, Kansas Stormcursed said:

Incomplete

Working title: Contradictory.

Alternate possibilities: facechanger, don't know

  Hide contents

I'm told this is the time to decide who I want to be

But I've just spent it tryna [phonetic for rhythm] be the man that others see

Each hour of the day I change my shape my lies my self

I'll wear a different guise between one second and the next

A thousamd different molds mark every version that they see

All stored inside my head, all catalogued and kept in reach

 

I'm a face-changer

Doppelganger

None of them is me

When I look in the

Mirror I don't

Know the man I see

I am one, I'm the

Other, I am

Somewhere in between

I can't keep shifting

It's so goddamn

Contradictory

 

That's brilliant!!!! I really love the rhythm in the chorus 

[CoderDrag0n8 He/They]

13 minutes ago, Kansas Stormcursed said:

Incomplete

Working title: Contradictory.

Alternate possibilities: facechanger, don't know

  Reveal hidden contents

I'm told this is the time to decide who I want to be

But I've just spent it tryna [phonetic for rhythm] be the man that others see

Each hour of the day I change my shape my lies my self

I'll wear a different guise between one second and the next

A thousamd different molds mark every version that they see

All stored inside my head, all catalogued and kept in reach

 

I'm a face-changer

Doppelganger

None of them is me

When I look in the

Mirror I don't

Know the man I see

I am one, I'm the

Other, I am

Somewhere in between

I can't keep shifting

It's so goddamn

Contradictory

 

BARRRRSSSSSSSSSS

[Kansas Stormcursed he/him]

Warning: dark and suizidal themes

Spoiler

Jane was a girl from a real nice family

They're just what a family should be

Her parents would help her through all of her problems

So why did she still want to leave

 

Sam was a boy from the south side of town

His daddy had left 'fore he's four

His mama she loved him but sometimes got angry

And he didn't feel anymore

 

Jane knew she didn't have strength 'nough for it

Her shelter it just made her weak

So she started looking for someone to help her

Find out how to make it quick

 

Sam kept his head down and went through his life

And started to wonder what if

He started to want a way out of his future

And he started eyeing that cliff

 

They met out back of the school after hours

Both watching the edge of a knife

They talked and decided to wait and consider

What somebody else could make life

 

They had dark days but they helped to get through

Each holding the other one up

They talked every day and they clung to each other

But soon it just wasn't enough

 

Sam came home late one day caught up in traffic

And found the place empty and dark

He ran to the school to the woods sprawled behind

And found her with steel in her heart

 

Morning it broke over red and blue lights

And all that was left of two lives

Four men dressed in blue stood around hesitant

To move those with hands still entwined

 

Time in life is fleeting and it goes within a blink

The slow draw in and exhale out just gone not to return

Some can't find the reasons to hold on and carry through

Some fires slowly crackle and some fires quickly burn

 

I can't keep you here forever though I'll try my best

I know you'll choose the time to leave and sink into the deep

All I ask is for a promise kept while you stay here

Please try to make this world a better place before you leave

 

[CoderDrag0n8 He/They]

2 hours ago, Kansas Stormcursed said:

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Jane was a girl from a real nice family

They're just what a family should be

Her parents would help her through all of her problems

So why did she still want to leave

 

Sam was a boy from the south side of town

His daddy had left 'fore he's four

His mama she loved him but sometimes got angry

And he didn't feel anymore

 

Jane knew she didn't have strength 'nough for it

Her shelter it just made her weak

So she started looking for someone to help her

Find out how to make it quick

 

Sam kept his head down and went through his life

And started to wonder what if

He started to want a way out of his future

And he started eyeing that cliff

 

They met out back of the school after hours

Both watching the edge of a knife

They talked and decided to wait and consider

What somebody else could make life

 

They had dark days but they helped to get through

Each holding the other one up

They talked every day and they clung to each other

But soon it just wasn't enough

 

Sam came home late one day caught up in traffic

And found the place empty and dark

He ran to the school to the woods sprawled behind

And found her with steel in her heart

 

Morning it broke over red and blue lights

And all that was left of two lives

Four men dressed in blue stood around hesitant

To move those with hands still entwined

 

Time in life is fleeting and it goes within a blink

The slow draw in and exhale out just gone not to return

Some can't find the reasons to hold on and carry through

Some fires slowly crackle and some fires quickly burn

 

I can't keep you here forever though I'll try my best

I know you'll choose the time to leave and sink into the deep

All I ask is for a promise kept while you stay here

Please try to make this world a better place before you leave

 

HOLY F-

[Kansas Stormcursed he/him]

1 minute ago, CoderDrag0n8 said:

HOLY F-

Very similar to Spartan's reaction

[Honors Spectral Image She/her]

10 hours ago, Kansas Stormcursed said:

Warning: dark and suizidal themes

  Hide contents

Jane was a girl from a real nice family

They're just what a family should be

Her parents would help her through all of her problems

So why did she still want to leave

 

Sam was a boy from the south side of town

His daddy had left 'fore he's four

His mama she loved him but sometimes got angry

And he didn't feel anymore

 

Jane knew she didn't have strength 'nough for it

Her shelter it just made her weak

So she started looking for someone to help her

Find out how to make it quick

 

Sam kept his head down and went through his life

And started to wonder what if

He started to want a way out of his future

And he started eyeing that cliff

 

They met out back of the school after hours

Both watching the edge of a knife

They talked and decided to wait and consider

What somebody else could make life

 

They had dark days but they helped to get through

Each holding the other one up

They talked every day and they clung to each other

But soon it just wasn't enough

 

Sam came home late one day caught up in traffic

And found the place empty and dark

He ran to the school to the woods sprawled behind

And found her with steel in her heart

 

Morning it broke over red and blue lights

And all that was left of two lives

Four men dressed in blue stood around hesitant

To move those with hands still entwined

 

Time in life is fleeting and it goes within a blink

The slow draw in and exhale out just gone not to return

Some can't find the reasons to hold on and carry through

Some fires slowly crackle and some fires quickly burn

 

I can't keep you here forever though I'll try my best

I know you'll choose the time to leave and sink into the deep

All I ask is for a promise kept while you stay here

Please try to make this world a better place before you leave

 

Nice

[SpartanBrigade He/Him]

9 hours ago, Kansas Stormcursed said:

Very similar to Spartan's reaction

Objection your honor

12 hours ago, Kansas Stormcursed said:

Warning: dark and suizidal themes

  Reveal hidden contents

Jane was a girl from a real nice family

They're just what a family should be

Her parents would help her through all of her problems

So why did she still want to leave

 

Sam was a boy from the south side of town

His daddy had left 'fore he's four

His mama she loved him but sometimes got angry

And he didn't feel anymore

 

Jane knew she didn't have strength 'nough for it

Her shelter it just made her weak

So she started looking for someone to help her

Find out how to make it quick

 

Sam kept his head down and went through his life

And started to wonder what if

He started to want a way out of his future

And he started eyeing that cliff

 

They met out back of the school after hours

Both watching the edge of a knife

They talked and decided to wait and consider

What somebody else could make life

 

They had dark days but they helped to get through

Each holding the other one up

They talked every day and they clung to each other

But soon it just wasn't enough

 

Sam came home late one day caught up in traffic

And found the place empty and dark

He ran to the school to the woods sprawled behind

And found her with steel in her heart

 

Morning it broke over red and blue lights

And all that was left of two lives

Four men dressed in blue stood around hesitant

To move those with hands still entwined

 

Time in life is fleeting and it goes within a blink

The slow draw in and exhale out just gone not to return

Some can't find the reasons to hold on and carry through

Some fires slowly crackle and some fires quickly burn

 

I can't keep you here forever though I'll try my best

I know you'll choose the time to leave and sink into the deep

All I ask is for a promise kept while you stay here

Please try to make this world a better place before you leave

 

That's good man
Too good

[Kansas Stormcursed he/him]

2 minutes ago, SpartanBrigade said:

Objection your honor

That's good man
Too good

It was

Your reaction was the "more alcohol Jarvis"

Very similar

Danke sehr