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Just now, Spark of Hope said:

Zera came over and hugged him.

He hugs her back.

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Just now, Spark of Hope said:

"What happened?"

He takes a deep breath "nothing bad I don't think. I just feel guilty. For betraying him like this. And lying to him." He hangs his head. "And i feel bad that I haven't seen chloey that much. And same with halley."

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Permission to make revisions to his backstory?

 

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Just now, Hawks said:

He takes a deep breath "nothing bad I don't think. I just feel guilty. For betraying him like this. And lying to him." He hangs his head. "And i feel bad that I haven't seen chloey that much. And same with halley."

 

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Run the revisions by me

"You shouldn't."

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Just now, Spark of Hope said:

"You shouldn't."

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Oki. Cause rn I can't see bro being a criminal. He's to much of a sweetie pie. 

So rn im switching up stories with his parents 😏

"I want chloey to have the life i didn't have."

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Just now, Spark of Hope said:

"I- Let me clarify. You shouldn't feel guilty for betraying him."

 

He nods. "I know. It's like betraying your parent. I wouldn't be in this position without him. I know i shouldn't feel guilty. He's a horrible person."

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Ok so 

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New back story

He is the child of an affair of a senate woman and a miner. After that fell apart he was adopted by a family (the original one i wrote about) and everything about it is the same. Just add in more bulling and stuff bc he was an affair kid. It was really hard for him to do anything at all due to that. 

 

 

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Just now, Hawks said:

He nods. "I know. It's like betraying your parent. I wouldn't be in this position without him. I know i shouldn't feel guilty. He's a horrible person."

 

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That looks good. What was his original family like, and is his miner father the same as the one who died in the mine that collapsed?

"Maybe you wouldn't be in this position. But so many people are being hurt. It's because we have this opportunity that it's important to stand up for them."

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1 minute ago, Spark of Hope said:

"Maybe you wouldn't be in this position. But so many people are being hurt. It's because we have this opportunity that it's important to stand up for them."

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Yeah after he gets adopted the story is the same

He nods and wipes his eyes. "Thank you" he whispers. 

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Just now, Spark of Hope said:

She nodded and smiled.

 

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For his bio or the adopted?

He stands. "Im going to shower."

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Just now, Spark of Hope said:

She nodded. "I'll be going to bed, then."

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His new family cared about him. They taught him how to defend himself and raised him like a son. Like your basic loving family. They struggled with money alot due to the status of the district they were in. But they tried their best. Then like the mom died when having chloey and you know the rest

He nods and takes a shower. 

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Just now, Hawks said:
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His new family cared about him. They taught him how to defend himself and raised him like a son. Like your basic loving family. They struggled with money alot due to the status of the district they were in. But they tried their best. Then like the mom died when having chloey and you know the rest

He nods and takes a shower. 

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Yep change approved

 

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Just now, Spark of Hope said:

 

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Yay!

He gets out dries his hair and gets in bed to sleep 

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Just now, Spark of Hope said:

The next morning...

Zera was working on her knitting.

He wakes up and rubs his face. "Hey zera."

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Just now, Spark of Hope said:

"Good morning, Taylor. Did you sleep well?"

He nods getting up. "As well as one can." He walks to the closet and grabs one of his uniforms. "I shpuod probably stay around the castle today."

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Just now, Hawks said:

He nods getting up. "As well as one can." He walks to the closet and grabs one of his uniforms. "I shpuod probably stay around the castle today."

"You should. Should we send a messenger for Chloey and Halley?"

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1 minute ago, Spark of Hope said:

"You should. Should we send a messenger for Chloey and Halley?"

He hums. "I think it's best if I distance myself from halley more." As he says that his winces. 

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Just now, Hawks said:

He hums. "I think it's best if I distance myself from halley more." As he says that his winces. 

"I disagree. While yesterday was... upsetting to Ivor, he knows how much Halley means to Chloey, and how even though you 'aren't with her' anymore, you still care for her and were greatly upset by her injuries. It will be alright, I think."

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Just now, Spark of Hope said:

"I disagree. While yesterday was... upsetting to Ivor, he knows how much Halley means to Chloey, and how even though you 'aren't with her' anymore, you still care for her and were greatly upset by her injuries. It will be alright, I think."

He nods. "Alright. Let's do that. And i think chloey will like being in a castle."

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Just now, Hawks said:

He nods. "Alright. Let's do that. And i think chloey will like being in a castle."

Zera left her knitting on the chair and carefully drafted a message, which she handed to a messenger to take to the apartment.

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Just now, Spark of Hope said:

Zera left her knitting on the chair and carefully drafted a message, which she handed to a messenger to take to the apartment.

He changed into his uniform and nodded. "Im gonna do a patrol of the castle." (pretend that's his regular routine)

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