Current WIP (Feedback Welcome)

[TheSurvivorofDeath]

I know I know, posting again.

This is my current WIP, and I’d like as much constructive criticism as possible. This copy won’t update as I edit my main draft so I’ll post the occasional updated version if this topic actually gets any traction.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/11byOWTcncSI7-X3lmn3icw3If81GYJgZoNcIPJzGkqk/edit

I’d prefer if comments were left on this topic and not on the document, thank you.

I look forward to hearing your thoughts.

Edited November 12, 2023 by TheSurvivorofDeath