The World of Saisulsom

[Lord Gregorio he/him]

The link for a world I'm making. Just want some opinions and I'm bored. So. Ya. Feel free to take a look and comment on the doc with any input you have.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RceI4DBOh3ewql8mrempae4_wWeR1dy0VedW4GXO44I/edit?usp=sharing

[Sherlock Holmes he/him]

This is incredible, Gregorio. I really like the names and how varied the coverage is. I don't have many more thoughts, though, I don't have the time at the moment.

[Lord Gregorio he/him]

30 minutes ago, Sherlock Holmes said:

This is incredible, Gregorio. I really like the names and how varied the coverage is. I don't have many more thoughts, though, I don't have the time at the moment.

That's aight. Thank you. I appreciate the look. It's just a world I was working on for a bit for a book. The book was too complex for a first book, so I'm doing a different book that's a lot simpler.

[Sherlock Holmes he/him]

5 minutes ago, Gregorio said:

That's aight. Thank you. I appreciate the look. It's just a world I was working on for a bit for a book. The book was too complex for a first book, so I'm doing a different book that's a lot simpler.

For me I just went "yeah storm it" and went all out on the first one. Granted, the worldbuilding that's actually in the book is pretty limited compared to what exists canonically in the world.

[Lord Gregorio he/him]

1 minute ago, Sherlock Holmes said:

For me I just went "yeah storm it" and went all out on the first one. Granted, the worldbuilding that's actually in the book is pretty limited compared to what exists canonically in the world.

Ya. Worldbuilding is so much fun. But when you write a book, so much more is added to the world and you have to be careful to not contradict yourself, or at least to go back and fix it. I like how you used "storm it" btw. It comes from listening to the stormlight archive too much.  

[Sherlock Holmes he/him]

2 hours ago, Gregorio said:

Ya. Worldbuilding is so much fun. But when you write a book, so much more is added to the world and you have to be careful to not contradict yourself, or at least to go back and fix it. I like how you used "storm it" btw. It comes from listening to the stormlight archive too much.  

Actually, I cussed and the Shard automatically changes any cuss words to cosmere-appropriate alternatives. I have been listening to the Stormlight Archive a lot, though.

[Lord Gregorio he/him]

12 minutes ago, Sherlock Holmes said:

Actually, I cussed and the Shard automatically changes any cuss words to cosmere-appropriate alternatives. I have been listening to the Stormlight Archive a lot, though.

Oh it does. That's cool. I didn't know that. I like that. 

[Sherlock Holmes he/him]

13 minutes ago, Gregorio said:

Oh it does. That's cool. I didn't know that. I like that. 

I understand why it was implemented, but I love swearing, so it's inconvenient for me.