Lord Gregorio Posted September 14, 2022 Report Share Posted September 14, 2022 The link for a world I'm making. Just want some opinions and I'm bored. So. Ya. Feel free to take a look and comment on the doc with any input you have. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RceI4DBOh3ewql8mrempae4_wWeR1dy0VedW4GXO44I/edit?usp=sharing 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sherlock Holmes Posted October 19, 2022 Report Share Posted October 19, 2022 This is incredible, Gregorio. I really like the names and how varied the coverage is. I don't have many more thoughts, though, I don't have the time at the moment. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Gregorio Posted October 19, 2022 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2022 30 minutes ago, Sherlock Holmes said: This is incredible, Gregorio. I really like the names and how varied the coverage is. I don't have many more thoughts, though, I don't have the time at the moment. That's aight. Thank you. I appreciate the look. It's just a world I was working on for a bit for a book. The book was too complex for a first book, so I'm doing a different book that's a lot simpler. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sherlock Holmes Posted October 19, 2022 Report Share Posted October 19, 2022 5 minutes ago, Gregorio said: That's aight. Thank you. I appreciate the look. It's just a world I was working on for a bit for a book. The book was too complex for a first book, so I'm doing a different book that's a lot simpler. For me I just went "yeah storm it" and went all out on the first one. Granted, the worldbuilding that's actually in the book is pretty limited compared to what exists canonically in the world. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Gregorio Posted October 19, 2022 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2022 1 minute ago, Sherlock Holmes said: For me I just went "yeah storm it" and went all out on the first one. Granted, the worldbuilding that's actually in the book is pretty limited compared to what exists canonically in the world. Ya. Worldbuilding is so much fun. But when you write a book, so much more is added to the world and you have to be careful to not contradict yourself, or at least to go back and fix it. I like how you used "storm it" btw. It comes from listening to the stormlight archive too much. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sherlock Holmes Posted October 19, 2022 Report Share Posted October 19, 2022 2 hours ago, Gregorio said: Ya. Worldbuilding is so much fun. But when you write a book, so much more is added to the world and you have to be careful to not contradict yourself, or at least to go back and fix it. I like how you used "storm it" btw. It comes from listening to the stormlight archive too much. Actually, I cussed and the Shard automatically changes any cuss words to cosmere-appropriate alternatives. I have been listening to the Stormlight Archive a lot, though. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Gregorio Posted October 19, 2022 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2022 12 minutes ago, Sherlock Holmes said: Actually, I cussed and the Shard automatically changes any cuss words to cosmere-appropriate alternatives. I have been listening to the Stormlight Archive a lot, though. Oh it does. That's cool. I didn't know that. I like that. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sherlock Holmes Posted October 19, 2022 Report Share Posted October 19, 2022 13 minutes ago, Gregorio said: Oh it does. That's cool. I didn't know that. I like that. I understand why it was implemented, but I love swearing, so it's inconvenient for me. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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