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Poem: Expectations


*Note* Soooo it turns out poetry is a really good outlet. Wrote this last night. Hope you enjoy! *End Note*

 

Expectations

A grip like a vise

Slowly crushing you

They start-

A pebble

A rock

A boulder

An avalanche

Breaking you down

Here a little there a little

Bit by bit

Until you are broken

You want so badly to be enough

But it always feels like you’re never enough

And you spend so long trying so hard

You don’t realize

The one holding you back the most

 

Is


 

You

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Adonalsium Will Return

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Wow. Again, I wish I could write like this. Also, *gives lots of hugs*

Fizz9

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This is really good!

I like the part where the white space emphasizes the how the expectations grow.

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