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Andyk and Mandamon, thanks for your comments! I appreciate the honesty in your critiques.
Submitting this story, I knew it needed work but I couldn't identify exactly what needed to be fixed. Your comments helped considerably!
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Hi everyone,
This is a short story that I recently wrote. This is only the second short story I have written, so I am open to any and all feedback that might help me improve (i.e. what works, what doesn't work, what's unclear, if anything is boring, the structure of the story, etc.)!
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Hello,
I'd like to submit something this Monday.
Thanks!
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Thanks everyone for your thoughtful critiques. I appreciate the frankness and specificity in what you said, it has made me think about things that I had previously been unaware of. I will definitely take into consideration everything that was said when I get to the editing stage and as I continue to write.
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Hello,
This is my first submission to Reading Excuses. It the the first chapter of my novel tentatively titled "The Swords of Essence". It is the first novel I have tried writing, so I do not doubt it will be horrible - so bring on the critiques so that I can learn how to improve!
Thanks so much!
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Dec. 16, 2013 - Shadow - Through Madness
in Reading Excuses
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Hi Goat,
Thanks for your comments.
I had never noticed how often I use the words "abruptly" and "suddenly" and now that you pointed it out, it sticks out like a sore thumb. So, thanks for that
. That, and my tendency for redundancies... I am definitely going to look out for these things in revisions and in my other writings!