my short story, preview

[Surgebound Rainspren he/him]

I wanted to get some feed back on my short mystery story and I thought "hey why not on a site dedicated to books"

its still a work in progress and im not releasing the ending YET but I just wanted some feed back. by the way sorry about editorial issues this is the unedited copy.

 

also its called prologue because I was originally going to write it in parts but did it all on one doc. 

 

  

mysery proluge.docx

[Jo and the Bush all/any]

Very Good, But next I recommend Posting this in the Creator's Corner. More people go there, and you'll Get more Reviews.