Need feedback, and maybe some editing?(the pay sucks sorry)

[Guest]

Heyo, I don't talk much around here but I've got a lot of writing going on in the background... checking out my site (https://sites.google.com/view/noahairmet/home) would be great and I'd love someone to give me some feedback on the worldbuilding I've done for the book I'm finishing planning...

The works that I would really like feedback for are Unkown Cultures and maybe Sanctuary. See my site for details; I hope it's not too confusing...

Thanks for paying attention this long!

Edit: Here's the links for the ones I need, I've realized it's a lot easier this way.

The Forgotten Sanctuary: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pvhAvVyJUqIpbz9KxISrQpWRpQ8dCRctkPV0M-_soO0/edit?usp=sharing

Unknown Cultures: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BkA3msV_r_jAvi3vqjFcVs-FaVEs2WHueQM8sf19kdA/edit?usp=sharing

 

 

Edited September 4, 2018 by PrinceDusty

[Jehoiada he/him]

I'm interested in a test read, I would love to help.

[Guest]

Alright, do you have an email I can send some google docs to? Be sure to check my site to see what exactly you'd want to review- because I need opinions on pretty much everything

Edited September 2, 2018 by PrinceDusty