Ink and Embers Any pronouns Posted October 12, 2025 Posted October 12, 2025 Hi! I occasionally write poetry and I wanted to post some on here! Feedback appreciated! Quote I met a boy of scars and stardust With the night sky on his skin He greeted me by my name And asked me where I'd been So I answered him with where I was Twenty minutes ago or more He shook his head and told me, "Not then, but before" So I told him of the house That used to be my home "Ah, but _that_ was built of dust and brick That before had been a stone" So I spoke then of the Earth And of lands, future and former He chuckled to himself, then said, "No, but you're getting warmer" So I recounted stories I knew Of explosions and cosmic stars And he smiled and said "Almost" Then ran a finger along his scars "We all were children of the void With stardust in our veins But we forgot to see the skies and nights And all we recall is pain." Quote It's just a word, or so they say Another word and another day Just another thing that people say Another set of letters that won't stay It's just a word, it can't hurt you Can't see red blood and claim it's blue It has no power; it's a trend, something new Maybe it hurts, but that's on you It's just a word, another label Thought up by fools to complicate the fable Nothing that matters, temporary, unstable Not one for community, when you're able It's just a word, an identity or slur A curse or a community, here to stay, or a blur A word to comfort; perhaps to cause a stir It can't hurt, can't heal, it's Just A Word 3
Seonid he/him Posted October 12, 2025 Posted October 12, 2025 Beautiful. I'm no expert on poetry, so I can't give specific "What if you did X" feedback, but I liked them. 1
Ink and Embers Any pronouns Posted October 12, 2025 Author Posted October 12, 2025 1 hour ago, Seonid said: Beautiful. I'm no expert on poetry, so I can't give specific "What if you did X" feedback, but I liked them. Thank you very much!!! I'm glad you like them!!!!!
CoderDrag0n8 He/Him Posted October 18, 2025 Posted October 18, 2025 On 10/11/2025 at 11:17 PM, Ink and Embers said: Hi! I occasionally write poetry and I wanted to post some on here! Feedback appreciated! bars
Ink and Embers Any pronouns Posted October 18, 2025 Author Posted October 18, 2025 1 hour ago, CoderDrag0n8 said: bars ??? I wrote another poem? Spoiler I dreamt last night of you You hated me I suppose that's true. I apologise for the cage. I apologised for your rage. Our rage. The night is dark But the day is no brighter. You told me to fight But I am no fighter. Our existence is war. I dream, in this day of nights, it is a war we can win.
CoderDrag0n8 He/Him Posted October 18, 2025 Posted October 18, 2025 10 hours ago, Ink and Embers said: ??? I wrote another poem? Reveal hidden contents I dreamt last night of you You hated me I suppose that's true. I apologise for the cage. I apologised for your rage. Our rage. The night is dark But the day is no brighter. You told me to fight But I am no fighter. Our existence is war. I dream, in this day of nights, it is a war we can win. bars is a slang term that basically means hot dang it means fire but mostly for poetry and songs 2
Ink and Embers Any pronouns Posted October 18, 2025 Author Posted October 18, 2025 5 minutes ago, CoderDrag0n8 said: bars is a slang term that basically means hot dang it means fire but mostly for poetry and songs Oh!!!! Thank you very much!!!!!
CoderDrag0n8 He/Him Posted October 18, 2025 Posted October 18, 2025 21 minutes ago, Ink and Embers said: Oh!!!! Thank you very much!!!!! Course! 10 hours ago, Ink and Embers said: ??? I wrote another poem? Reveal hidden contents I dreamt last night of you You hated me I suppose that's true. I apologise for the cage. I apologised for your rage. Our rage. The night is dark But the day is no brighter. You told me to fight But I am no fighter. Our existence is war. I dream, in this day of nights, it is a war we can win. That sounds like a heavy metal song lol 1
Ink and Embers Any pronouns Posted October 27, 2025 Author Posted October 27, 2025 I wrote another poem! Spoiler Welcome home No one ever said You do not belong here Because others cry You are cared for It isn't true that Anyone will hate you It's a reverse poem; you can read it top down or bottom up! 4
Ink and Embers Any pronouns Posted October 27, 2025 Author Posted October 27, 2025 7 minutes ago, IHadAThought said: Ooooo, cool, like a ketek Kind of! I have some symmetrical keteks somewhere too, if I can remember where I put them...
CoderDrag0n8 He/Him Posted October 28, 2025 Posted October 28, 2025 17 hours ago, Ink and Embers said: I wrote another poem! Reveal hidden contents Welcome home No one ever said You do not belong here Because others cry You are cared for It isn't true that Anyone will hate you It's a reverse poem; you can read it top down or bottom up! ooooo that hits hard down its yay up its ahhhhhhhhhhh 1
Ink and Embers Any pronouns Posted October 28, 2025 Author Posted October 28, 2025 20 hours ago, Seonid said: Oh that's cool! 6 hours ago, CoderDrag0n8 said: ooooo that hits hard down its yay up its ahhhhhhhhhhh Thank you very much!!! I found the semi - okay ketek I wrote! Spoiler Tears with silver, weeper. The rain brings life. Given life, bring rain: the Weeping, silver with tears.
CoderDrag0n8 He/Him Posted October 29, 2025 Posted October 29, 2025 17 hours ago, Ink and Embers said: Thank you very much!!! I found the semi - okay ketek I wrote! Reveal hidden contents Tears with silver, weeper. The rain brings life. Given life, bring rain: the Weeping, silver with tears. ooooooooooooo 1
Clarkmon22 He/Him Posted October 29, 2025 Posted October 29, 2025 On 10/27/2025 at 2:40 AM, Ink and Embers said: I wrote another poem! Hide contents Welcome home No one ever said You do not belong here Because others cry You are cared for It isn't true that Anyone will hate you It's a reverse poem; you can read it top down or bottom up! that's my favorite one!!! as coder said, bars. 1
Ink and Embers Any pronouns Posted October 29, 2025 Author Posted October 29, 2025 16 hours ago, CoderDrag0n8 said: ooooooooooooo 2 hours ago, Clarkmon22 said: that's my favorite one!!! as coder said, bars. Haha, thank you very much!!
CoderDrag0n8 He/Him Posted October 30, 2025 Posted October 30, 2025 12 hours ago, Clarkmon22 said: that's my favorite one!!! as coder said, bars. hehe its catching on im living gretchen's dream rn 1
Ink and Embers Any pronouns Posted November 9, 2025 Author Posted November 9, 2025 (edited) Spoiler A dream. My dream. Torn by your bloodied hands. You smile at the sound a breaking dream makes. What did you hear? The zvfr of velcro The shrip of paper The knell of broken glass. Those were what I heard When I looked into just three of the splinters Of the broken mirror. Seven year's bad dreams. Seven year's dreams, gone bad. Do you rejoice in the crunch sound dreams make? Or do you hear something else? Can you not see the shards tearing blood in my hands? Edited November 9, 2025 by Ink and Embers Spag 2
-ACE- he/him Posted November 10, 2025 Posted November 10, 2025 On 11/9/2025 at 12:24 AM, Ink and Embers said: Hide contents A dream. My dream. Torn by your bloodied hands. You smile at the sound a breaking dream makes. What did you hear? The zvfr of velcro The shrip of paper The knell of broken glass. Those were what I heard When I looked into just three of the splinters Of the broken mirror. Seven year's bad dreams. Seven year's dreams, gone bad. Do you rejoice in the crunch sound dreams make? Or do you hear something else? Can you not see the shards tearing blood in my hands? neat 1
Seonid he/him Posted November 10, 2025 Posted November 10, 2025 On 11/9/2025 at 12:24 AM, Ink and Embers said: Reveal hidden contents A dream. My dream. Torn by your bloodied hands. You smile at the sound a breaking dream makes. What did you hear? The zvfr of velcro The shrip of paper The knell of broken glass. Those were what I heard When I looked into just three of the splinters Of the broken mirror. Seven year's bad dreams. Seven year's dreams, gone bad. Do you rejoice in the crunch sound dreams make? Or do you hear something else? Can you not see the shards tearing blood in my hands? That hits hard 1
Ink and Embers Any pronouns Posted December 2, 2025 Author Posted December 2, 2025 On 11/10/2025 at 6:27 PM, Seonid said: That hits hard On 11/10/2025 at 4:54 PM, -ACE- said: neat Thank you!!! New poem Spoiler In my dreams I got three wishes All impossible to grant But at least I tried to wish And didn't waste the chance. The first wish was for kindness So no one would have to fight But apparently compassion Isn't a human right. The second wish was smaller: I wished the earth would survive But when it's our fault in the first place We can't fake shock if it dies. The third wish was just for me But still impossible to give: To be someone thay could be loved But still someone I could live. The wish whisked around me And whispered in my ear, If loving them is killing you, Why are you still here? In my dreams I got three wishes That confirmed a guess of mine: That we don't need a miracle We can change this if we try.
CoderDrag0n8 He/Him Posted December 3, 2025 Posted December 3, 2025 6 hours ago, Ookla the Perpetually Disc said: Thank you!!! New poem Reveal hidden contents In my dreams I got three wishes All impossible to grant But at least I tried to wish And didn't waste the chance. The first wish was for kindness So no one would have to fight But apparently compassion Isn't a human right. The second wish was smaller: I wished the earth would survive But when it's our fault in the first place We can't fake shock if it dies. The third wish was just for me But still impossible to give: To be someone thay could be loved But still someone I could live. The wish whisked around me And whispered in my ear, If loving them is killing you, Why are you still here? In my dreams I got three wishes That confirmed a guess of mine: That we don't need a miracle We can change this if we try. CHILLS GENUINE CHILLS 1
Ink and Embers Any pronouns Posted January 1 Author Posted January 1 On 12/3/2025 at 2:37 AM, CoderDrag0n8 said: CHILLS GENUINE CHILLS Thank you! I have another one! Spoiler If I met myself Twenty or so years ago I wouldn't waste my time Saying what she already knows I wouldn't tell her "It gets better" Because sometimes that would be a lie I wouldn't tell her to keep going Or that it's okay to cry Telling her of bravery Would only waste the chance It wouldn't help at all To speak of self reliance If we passed in the street I doubt she'd know my name For twenty years is too long a time To ever stay the same If I tapped her on the shoulder She'd see a stranger in my place But perhaps a glimmer of her Might recognise our face If I met myself Twenty or so years ago I wouldn't waste my breath Saying what she already knows I wouldn't whisper truths Or even feed her lies I'd simply offer her a hand And on my shoulder let her cry
Ink and Embers Any pronouns Posted January 22 Author Posted January 22 More poems! (I wrote this one on my arm a while back) Spoiler Stardust in your veins Don't spill it Each drop is worth more than crystal You can keep going You cannot go back There are no answers there Stop. Breathe. Stay. Tw: general mentions of queerphobia and suicidal thoughts Spoiler It's unnatural it's unreal you're faking it's all a lie Aren't you are you who are you why do you want to die? Abnormal strange wrong broken Whispers seen as too outspoken Nevermind we aren't the only ones Nevermind your daughter's not your son Too young to know too young to see Words set traps you'll never be free Even your mind won't spare you this time. I should be used to this. So why does it still hurt?
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