I made some Syl fanart and need some critiques

[MBtheEdgedancer She/her]

I just keep feeling like it’s not 100% book accurate and I would love some help to make it better!

[Sophrosyne He/any]

 Pretty!
Umm as far as I can remember it's pretty book accurate and very well done.
She's always described as girlish and though I think of her in a silk/gossamer dress myself she's one to change outfits all that time so the outfit's fine.
The closest to criticism I have is they samey coloured background may be hard to read in some senecios but that's stylistic prefence more than much else.

Sorry I didn't have much helpful, but I couldn't let you go responsless!

[Born of Mist He/Him]

I've always imagined her with slightly shorter hair than how you have her here, but that's just me. I think it's amazing!

[MBtheEdgedancer She/her]

10 hours ago, Sophrosyne said:

 Pretty!
Umm as far as I can remember it's pretty book accurate and very well done.
She's always described as girlish and though I think of her in a silk/gossamer dress myself she's one to change outfits all that time so the outfit's fine.
The closest to criticism I have is they samey coloured background may be hard to read in some senecios but that's stylistic prefence more than much else.

Sorry I didn't have much helpful, but I couldn't let you go responsless!

Thanks for the advice!