dezaS Hᴇ/Hɪᴍ Posted January 23, 2025 Posted January 23, 2025 (edited) Here's some complete crem of song lyrics. If I could have honest advice (not just flaming) I would appreciate it. (This is what happens when you give me half an hour and a computer). True Desolation After all This isn’t the last you’ll see of me You watched me fall Ancient rites are not to be Disturbed Unperturbed you watched as I Fell apart and seemed to die Oath and Life within my lie Another desolation nigh Inner space The red, the blue and green collide A better place The new revival once denied Returns Nevermore the shadows sound Honor dead upon the ground None before the red tide drowned The tow'rs syncretic light is bound The time Has come to leave and fly Away we climb Ever up into the sky For now Blue fell, Green has fled the scene Recreant state of in-between Red reigns now, through thought obscene We will return, restore routine! After all This isn’t the last you’ll see of me You watched me fall Ancient rites are not to be Disturbed! Again, this is absolute and complete crem and not the final lyrics. Any suggestions on how it could be improved would be welcome, or advice on how best to put it to music. Thank you! Edited January 24, 2025 by DezaS fix 2x 1
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