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2 minutes ago, The Aspiring Archivist said:

"Are you okay with that?"

“Yes.”

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Thank you for giving me a great idea for a future scene in my book!

 

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1 minute ago, The Aspiring Archivist said:

He looked at her with concern. "Okay..." He pulled away reluctantly.

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Yeah, I now know how I’m going to do something :D

She let him, looking back at him seeming without emotion.

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Just now, Lightweaver2 said:

She let him, looking back at him seeming without emotion.

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What about it was inspiring?

He took her hand, and led them to the prison. The guard that had released Helda was still outside, as though he had been waiting for them.

"Do you have someone we can talk to? We have some questions about Helda's incarceration."

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13 minutes ago, The Aspiring Archivist said:

He took her hand, and led them to the prison. The guard that had released Helda was still outside, as though he had been waiting for them.

"Do you have someone we can talk to? We have some questions about Helda's incarceration."

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Umm…spoiler stuff, sorry. 

She went with him, feeling confused.

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9 minutes ago, Lightweaver2 said:

Helda stood, waiting.

The guard led them to some sort of office, where a woman sat. A small sign on her desk indicated her as the warden of this wing of the prison. "Yes? You are a recently released convict, I believe. You have questions?"

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7 minutes ago, The Aspiring Archivist said:

The guard led them to some sort of office, where a woman sat. A small sign on her desk indicated her as the warden of this wing of the prison. "Yes? You are a recently released convict, I believe. You have questions?"

“Yes. How long was my imprisonment?”

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Just now, Lightweaver2 said:

“Yes. How long was my imprisonment?”

"One year, for you. But time was contracted in your perception. This is common practice for immortals, allowing us to save time and resources, and be safer about your type."

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Just now, The Aspiring Archivist said:

"One year, for you. But time was contracted in your perception. This is common practice for immortals, allowing us to save time and resources, and be safer about your type."

She stepped back and sank to the floor, weeping.

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Just now, Lightweaver2 said:

She stepped back and sank to the floor, weeping.

The warden watched, uncaring. Tayen went down next to Helda, embracing her and looking at the warden with pure hate.

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Just now, The Aspiring Archivist said:

The warden watched, uncaring. Tayen went down next to Helda, embracing her and looking at the warden with pure hate.

She pushed Tayen away, head between her knees.

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4 minutes ago, The Aspiring Archivist said:

He waited with her, unsure what to do. Could he do anything?

She just kept sobbing, pointedly avoiding looking at him.

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6 minutes ago, The Aspiring Archivist said:

"Helda? Why won't you look at me?"

“I hate myself.” She stood and ran away from him.

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She’s not going fast, he can catch her.

 

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Just now, The Aspiring Archivist said:

"There is no one better. I'm not going to leave you. This wasn't your fault, Helda."

“There are many people better! Everyone’s better!”

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