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so guys for those of you that didn't know i have one completed draft of a novel i started in like 7th grade
so like a long long time ago
anyways so i was editing it earlier this school year (like september) and then last night i randomly got the urge to edit it again
anyways so for my editing process, i like to go through the whole document and write comments on literally everything
it takes a long time but its so fun
anyways here are some of the snippets i found that i thought i would share with you guys bc i think they're funny
Spoiler"piper being this dumb is not even cute or demure or mindful"
"mmm"
"thats crazy talk my dude"
"ok its not giving baddie rebel
but um ya thats accurate to how i would react""this person seems to be looking at everyone pretty strangely"
"im a reader, which way? I cant see the freaking way Wallace"
"w rizz wallace???
"
"i like the thinking stuff
but i really dont know piper yet
except for the fact that she craves violence??
piper girl are u ok
i have a therapist u can call""what a jerk"
"so that transition sucked"
"not sure what i think of this
only that its lowk kinda weird""MOOOREE DETAILLLL"
"THREE WEEKS? WALLACE U SICKO U KNOW U DONT NEED TO STAY THERE THAT LONG
THATS 21 FREAKING DAYS""okay wait real talk why is she writing on a freaking tree
like why not write on paper??
why a tree?
is she like trying to make it last forever??
why?""i totally forgot that i set up the book for a whole other plot"
"'Hey guess what mom's missing!'
'Oh no!'
'ya anyways--'""im glad she enjoyed it
BC SHES BEEN AWAY FROM HOME FOR FREAKING 21 DAYS""brainwashing your sister is never a good idea lol"
"creativity +1000
aura +1000""she's marriagable??
let me go find my pickup lines rq""there are more of them??"
"savage ok"
"how is he able to---what
w hat
w h a t.""sir what
thats a terrible catchphrase""tell me why thats so creepy
like bro
ew no u grown man""why are we deluding ourselves?"
"Why does being cold make him happy?"
"real talk why does she have a door"
"umm
why does she have a gun?""SIMP MOVE"
so i'm not giving you context so it might not be as funny to you as it is to me but its really really funny to me so there
also if you have any funny snippets from your editing i'd love to see them!
