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Darth Squirrely

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  1. Darth Squirrely
    Here is today's prompt. I'm going to give it a shot:
    Today’s prompt is a bit of a smorgasbord, and reflects the fact that we are at day seven. It asks you to write a poem with seven different phrases, ideas, or just plain old “things” in it. These are:
    1) an example of synasthetic metaphor — one that describes one sensory perception using adjectives more naturally suited to a different sense (e.g., “a red noise,” or a “a bitter touch”)
    2) a fruit
    3) the name (first or last) of someone you knew in school
    4) a rhetorical question
    5) a direct address to the poem’s audience — “Reader” or “mom” or “Michelle,” or maybe just “You”)
    6) a word in a foreign language
    7) a reference to a game of chance (darts or pool or the lottery or etc).
    _________________________
    How can you, a reader, know
    What reddish thoughts run through my mind?
    A haze of bloody tendencies
    There for only me to find?
    Like solitaire, I'm solitary
    Keeping my motivos close
    Hidden from the world around me
    Wanting things that no one knows
    A pink-brushed apple I am not
    Though Mr. Cherry claims it's so
    A daring accusation made
    That only brings unneeded woe
    I shall unleash the wrath within
    When certain things have come to pass
    But till that moment comes to be
    Remember, troubled, that I last
  2. Darth Squirrely
    When I was in high school, I took an AP English course. In our poetry section, I was introduced to the villanelle, an interesting poetic form. The poem we read was "Do not go gentle into that good night" by Dylan Thomas. It remains, to this day, my favorite poem ever.
    We also were given the assignment of writing our own villanelles; everyone liked mine but I lost it ages ago, and anyway I should write a fresh one as it's NaPoWriMo, not "Show off Poems You Wrote Ages Ago Month."
    So here I go, this is my attempt at writing a villanelle. Sadly, I used the same rhymes as Thomas. >.>
    Dancing smoothly in the misty night
    Turning gracefully on their way
    Figures made of shadow and light
    Drifting in and out of sight
    There since faded light of day
    Dancing smoothly in the misty night
    They leap and twirl, a dance that's quite
    Unquestionably wild and fey
    Figures made of shadow and light
    Stately still, all grace despite
    Their haunting, fierce display
    Dancing smoothly in the misty night
    Heart pounding, soaring like a kite
    I watch the magic scene at play
    Dancing smoothly in the misty night
    Figures made of shadow and light
  3. Darth Squirrely
    Poem 1: Much Younger Men
    I don't see how
    Age matters in the end
    Isn't it maturity
    That makes all the difference?
    If that's the case,
    Then I'm not a cougar
    Because everybody knows
    I'm the least mature of all.
    Poem 2: Treetops
    Sunshine, warm and bright
    Birdspecks lofting high
    Wondrous is the sight
    Of trees beneath the sky
    Poem 3: Delicious Terror
    This delicious terror
    Welling up in me
    Tastes of adrenaline
    Of racing breath,
    Pounding heart,
    Fear of life-ending death;
    Thrilling and perfect
    Poem 4: Flicker
    A flickering flame
    Moved here and there by each breath
    A candlelit night
    Poem 5: Waitress
    Clinking glasses
    Hushed murmur of many voices
    Fork there, spoon here, knife between
    Don't stop moving, look busy
    My job is fun
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