#1 Taln Fan he/him Posted October 27, 2021 Posted October 27, 2021 Not fully sure if this is an error or just strange wording, but it sounds like Alanik is calling Boomslug’s stripes red. I suppose that you could say he has black and red stripes, but they’re described in Sunreach as being red, with black stripes and black spines. This is chapter 6, page 52
RShara she/her Posted January 11, 2022 Posted January 11, 2022 Chapter 4, near the end, the word "instead" is used twice in the same sentence. Quote They’ve demanded we turn in our human co-conspirators, but of course we have none, so instead our government wants to turn me and other resistance members over to them instead.
AonEne he/him Posted February 3, 2023 Posted February 3, 2023 Skyward Flight Page 181 US hardcover: Quote Unity was already working with the enemy, trading away ReDawn's autonomy for the ability to destroy the Independence. Should this be "to destroy Independence" instead? The political parties are usually referred to without 'the' in front of them, unless there's a noun after them, such as "the Independence pilots". Page 342 US hardcover: Quote Quilan’s voice sounded panicked as he answered. “- just found them - told you everything we - have been perfectly loyal -” This is the only time cytonic communication like this is done "in quotes"; are those a mistake here?
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