xinoehp512 Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 The hot Emperor Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but 90 groovy chickens danced with 4,000,000 dead while rotting buffalo dust couches exploded. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shard of Reading Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 Just now, xinoehp512 said: The hot Emperor Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but 90 groovy chickens danced with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo dust couches exploded. I think that that sentence makes much more sense thank you. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chasmgoat Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 (edited) The hot Emperor Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but 90 groovy chickens danced with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo dust couches imploded. Edited November 10, 2020 by Chasmgoat 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enter a username Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 The hotheaded Emperor Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but 90 groovy chickens danced with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo dust couches imploded. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight of Iron Posted November 10, 2020 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 (edited) Quote I find it funny that no one ever changed the word store and that it has remained intact through like 80 posts. Edited November 10, 2020 by Knight of Iron 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aspiring Writer Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 12 minutes ago, Knight of Iron said: Quote We have bigger thing to worry about The hotheaded Lord Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but 90 groovy chickens danced with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo dust couches imploded. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chasmgoat Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 The hotheaded Lord Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship spore to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but 90 groovy chickens danced with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo dust couches imploded. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kelsier'sGodComplex Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 The hotheaded Lord Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship spore to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but 90 groovy chickens danced with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo skin couches imploded. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chasmgoat Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 The hotheaded Lord Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship spore to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but 90 groovy chickens danced with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo skin couches imploded. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mage Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 Hotheaded Lord Buckethead skatesd around the stone Scadrial spaceship spore to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but 90 groovy chickens danced with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo skin couches imploded. Quote Tense. You know. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danex Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 (edited) Quote Hotheaded Lord Buckethead skated around the stone Scadrial spaceship spore to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but 90 groovy chickens danced with 4,000,000 dead nouns, and rotting buffalo skin couches imploded. yw, now it makes grammatical sense again. Edit: well, I guess it sorta made sense before, if you added a comma/semicolon after ‘Buffalo’ Edit 2: I just realized that I accidentally did the opposite of what’s been happening, I put the sentence in a quote box and my commentary outside of it, but I think this actually makes more sense, so I propose we do it this way. Edit 3: I guess it also made sense before if you read ‘dead’ as a noun. Like, ‘the walking dead’ Edited November 10, 2020 by Danex 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Doomstick Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 The can sat on my lap 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Somebody from Scadrial Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 1 minute ago, Doomstick said: The can sat on my lap The dead can sat on my lap 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aspiring Writer Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 The dead cat sat on my lap. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Somebody from Scadrial Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 9 minutes ago, Aspiring Writer said: The dead cat sat on my lap. Spoiler Thank you that was my next change The dead cat sat horrifyingly on my lap. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aspiring Writer Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 1 minute ago, Somebody from Sel said: Reveal hidden contents Thank you that was my next change The dead cat sat horrifyingly on my lap. The dead cat sat horrifyingly on Buckethead's lap. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Somebody from Scadrial Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 Just now, Aspiring Writer said: The dead cat sat horrifyingly on Buckethead's lap. The zombie cat sat horrifyingly on Buckethead's lap 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aspiring Writer Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 The zombie cat sat horrifyingly on Lord Buckethead's lap 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Somebody from Scadrial Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 Just now, Aspiring Writer said: The zombie cat sat horrifyingly on Lord Buckethead's lap The zombie cat sat horrifyingly on Lord Q's lap 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aspiring Writer Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 The zombie cat sat horrifyingly on Lord Q's hat. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danex Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 (edited) 1 minute ago, Aspiring Writer said: The zombie cat sat horrifyingly on Lord Q's hat. The zombie sat horrifyingly on Lord Q’s hat. Edited November 10, 2020 by Danex I know it’s a bit early for a word removal, but the opportunity was too good to pass up. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aspiring Writer Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 Just now, Danex said: The zombie sat horrifyingly on Lord Q’s hat. The meme sat horrifyingly on Lord Q’s hat. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danex Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 Just now, Aspiring Writer said: The meme sat horrifyingly on Lord Q’s hat. The meme died horrifyingly on Lord Q’s hat. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aspiring Writer Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 1 minute ago, Danex said: The meme died horrifyingly on Lord Q’s hat. The meme hovered horrifyingly on Lord Q’s hat. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danex Posted November 10, 2020 Report Share Posted November 10, 2020 Just now, Aspiring Writer said: The meme hovered horrifyingly on Lord Q’s hat. The meme hovered horrifyingly over Lord Q’s hat. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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