Condensation Posted November 22, 2020 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2020 3 minutes ago, Channelknight Fadran said: "In the end, her greatest friends may have died / Gone from this world, but dark defied." “No, not the lines. The stanzas.” 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Channelknight Fadran Posted November 22, 2020 Report Share Posted November 22, 2020 3 minutes ago, Condensation said: “No, not the lines. The stanzas.” "Does that include the last couplet, or... you know what?" He passed her the prophecy. "Just take it." 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Condensation Posted November 22, 2020 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2020 (edited) 19 minutes ago, Channelknight Fadran said: "Does that include the last couplet, or... you know what?" He passed her the prophecy. "Just take it." “Thanks.” Melody scanned through the prophecy. “Here! The wielder of an ancient blade A master swordsman, trained by light I think that means I’m supposed to find a master swordsman to give the sword to. Oh, and it looks like there’s a lot about dying and death. That can’t be good.” One moment while I find it. Edited November 22, 2020 by Condensation 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Channelknight Fadran Posted November 22, 2020 Report Share Posted November 22, 2020 47 minutes ago, Condensation said: “Thanks.” Melody scanned through the prophecy. “Here! The wielder of an ancient blade A master swordsman, trained by light I think that means I’m supposed to find a master swordsman to give the sword to. Oh, and it looks like there’s a lot about dying and death. That can’t be good.” One moment while I find it. Only the one and only Connie would forget to use quotation marks after reading through a prophecy. "So... we aren't friends." 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mystic Syn Posted November 22, 2020 Report Share Posted November 22, 2020 8 minutes ago, Channelknight Fadran said: Only the one and only Connie would forget to use quotation marks after reading through a prophecy. "So... we aren't friends." Uhm actually *pulls out some glasses*, she didn't 'forget' them per se, but she did use them when she said "Here!" but without the end quotes for that specific phrase, so she is technically correct. But also, she should have used some when starting a new paragraph, but I'm getting ahead of myself and that's a different story. Bottom line is that I wouldn't say that she 'forgot' to use them, but that she could (probably should, idk; I'm just being an English teacher rn) have used them when starting a new paragraph of the prophecy. So don't mind me, but I'll be watching your friendship drama from the background where Q is. Also making sure that I got everything that I wanted to post about her in the status that I posted yesterday, lol. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xinoehp512 Posted November 23, 2020 Report Share Posted November 23, 2020 On 11/20/2020 at 9:26 PM, Channelknight Fadran said: Ellis narrated the prophecy: Under the guise of night and clouds of day Shall rise once more to face a timeless threat A soul who's mind was cast away And kill a Lord without regret In his finest hour of that fruitless night A hero will speak a final breath Though fighting still, but lose despite A prophecy ended with the Dark Lord's death. The wielder of an ancient blade A master swordsman, trained by light Who's lives unnumbered must be repaid Perhaps not winning, but still in the fight In the end, her greatest friends may have died Gone from this world, but dark defied. Gerald scratched his head. "This is odd," he said. "I've seen prophecies that were cryptic, but never one this... confusing." 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Condensation Posted November 23, 2020 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2020 6 hours ago, Channelknight Fadran said: Only the one and only Connie would forget to use quotation marks after reading through a prophecy. "So... we aren't friends." Didn't I tell you to ignore my grammar mistakes? Plus I'm bad at punctuation. Teach me! "Of course we're friends! Some prophecy can't change that." 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xinoehp512 Posted November 23, 2020 Report Share Posted November 23, 2020 "Like, are these sentences referring to one person or two?" continued Gerald. "Because it sounds like it's all talking about one hero, but there's two different pronouns used." 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Condensation Posted November 23, 2020 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2020 "Couplets count as stanzas, by the way. At least I'm pretty sure. And those last two lines don't look good for us if we're supposed to be the ones in the prophecy." 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Channelknight Fadran Posted November 23, 2020 Report Share Posted November 23, 2020 11 hours ago, Condensation said: Didn't I tell you to ignore my grammar mistakes? Plus I'm bad at punctuation. Teach me! "Of course we're friends! Some prophecy can't change that." "I meant that... you don't seem at all deterred about following through with this prophecy that seems quite inclined to kill me dead." 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Condensation Posted November 23, 2020 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2020 20 minutes ago, Channelknight Fadran said: "I meant that... you don't seem at all deterred about following through with this prophecy that seems quite inclined to kill me dead." ¨I´m sure that this isn´t about us. See, I just pass the sword to someone else and they can go find their team of... an amnesiac and a hero who´s destined to lose.¨ I´m sorry about my weird quotation marks and apostrophes, the chromebook that I´m on is weird. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Channelknight Fadran Posted November 23, 2020 Report Share Posted November 23, 2020 1 minute ago, Condensation said: ¨I´m sure that this isn´t about us. See, I just pass the sword to someone else and they can go find their team of... an amnesiac and a hero who´s destined to lose.¨ I´m sorry about my weird quotation marks and apostrophes, the chromebook that I´m on is weird. "Melody... it's about us. You can't just find another Dark Lord." Yeah... I was going to ask about that. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xinoehp512 Posted November 23, 2020 Report Share Posted November 23, 2020 "Do you understand what's going on in this prophecy?" Gerald asked Ellis. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Condensation Posted November 23, 2020 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2020 7 minutes ago, Channelknight Fadran said: "Melody... it's about us. You can't just find another Dark Lord." Yeah... I was going to ask about that. ¨Can and will, you just watch me. I´m not letting anything happen to my friends.¨ It´s so weird, I hate it and it makes my brain hurt. *sigh* 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Channelknight Fadran Posted November 23, 2020 Report Share Posted November 23, 2020 1 minute ago, xinoehp512 said: "Do you understand what's going on in this prophecy?" Gerald asked Ellis. "Not at all... but I understand part of it." 1 minute ago, Condensation said: ¨Can and will, you just watch me. I´m not letting anything happen to my friends.¨ It´s so weird, I hate it and it makes my brain hurt. *sigh* Ellis looked away from Melody. "You're... you're going to have to kill me." 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xinoehp512 Posted November 23, 2020 Report Share Posted November 23, 2020 1 minute ago, Channelknight Fadran said: "Not at all... but I understand part of it." "Do you know why it refers to the hero as a 'he' and then a 'she'?" 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Condensation Posted November 23, 2020 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2020 5 minutes ago, Channelknight Fadran said: "Not at all... but I understand part of it." Ellis looked away from Melody. "You're... you're going to have to kill me." ¨Hmph. Not happening.¨ 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Channelknight Fadran Posted November 23, 2020 Report Share Posted November 23, 2020 6 minutes ago, xinoehp512 said: "Do you know why it refers to the hero as a 'he' and then a 'she'?" Consistency errors. I'll go fix those... 2 minutes ago, Condensation said: ¨Hmph. Not happening.¨ "It's a prophecy, Melody. You can't just say no." 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xinoehp512 Posted November 23, 2020 Report Share Posted November 23, 2020 2 minutes ago, Channelknight Fadran said: Consistency errors. I'll go fix those... "It's a prophecy, Melody. You can't just say no." "I mean, you're not the Dark Lord yet, are you?" pointed out Gerald. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Condensation Posted November 23, 2020 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2020 3 minutes ago, Channelknight Fadran said: Consistency errors. I'll go fix those... "It's a prophecy, Melody. You can't just say no." ¨Can and will! N - O - No! Someone else can do that, we´re going to my house.¨ 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Channelknight Fadran Posted November 23, 2020 Report Share Posted November 23, 2020 1 minute ago, xinoehp512 said: "I mean, you're not the Dark Lord yet, are you?" pointed out Gerald. "I don't think I've ever not been the Dark Lord." Just now, Condensation said: ¨Can and will! N - O - No! Someone else can do that, we´re going to my house.¨ Ellis smiled. "Thanks. I guess we can go; this tower smells of old people anyways." 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Condensation Posted November 23, 2020 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2020 4 minutes ago, Channelknight Fadran said: "I don't think I've ever not been the Dark Lord." Ellis smiled. "Thanks. I guess we can go; this tower smells of old people anyways." ¨So... where are we?¨ Melody said, looking lost for a second before her usual smile resumes. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xinoehp512 Posted November 23, 2020 Report Share Posted November 23, 2020 13 minutes ago, Channelknight Fadran said: "I don't think I've ever not been the Dark Lord." "There are certain requirements for being a Dark Lord," said Gerald. "You don't fulfill... well, any of them." 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Channelknight Fadran Posted November 23, 2020 Report Share Posted November 23, 2020 14 minutes ago, Condensation said: ¨So... where are we?¨ Melody said, looking lost for a second before her usual smile resumes. In the... magician's tower? 6 minutes ago, xinoehp512 said: "There are certain requirements for being a Dark Lord," said Gerald. "You don't fulfill... well, any of them." "There are? And I don't?" 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xinoehp512 Posted November 23, 2020 Report Share Posted November 23, 2020 1 minute ago, Channelknight Fadran said: In the... magician's tower? "There are? And I don't?" "Yes. For one, you have to be dark. Evil. Destructive. At the very least, unpleasant!" 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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