Condensation Posted October 29, 2020 Report Share Posted October 29, 2020 On 28/10/2020 at 1:07 AM, Scout_Fox said: I request to hear your free-form poetry even if it sucks (which I'm sure it won't! )! Might not see till mornings but I requesth! Just remembered this. Okay, here it is! Spoiler People say: “I’ve heard so much about you.” I think: Heard? Or inferred? Did you hear? Or did you lessen the value of my company by virtue of your assumptions? I can’t control your thoughts. I can’t say what you should think I’m like. My hair, my personality. The way I look when I genuinely smile. All I can do is hope. Hope that we’re right. Hope that you try not to judge Or assume before you get a chance To form a real opinion. So: infer if you wish. Build a picture of me in your head and fantasize about me. But it’s not my fault when your walls crumble and fall, shaken by the reality that is ME. Because I am me. Not you. Not a picture in your head. MYSELF. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scout_Fox Posted October 30, 2020 Report Share Posted October 30, 2020 7 hours ago, Condensation said: Just remembered this. Okay, here it is! Hide contents People say: “I’ve heard so much about you.” I think: Heard? Or inferred? Did you hear? Or did you lessen the value of my company by virtue of your assumptions? I can’t control your thoughts. I can’t say what you should think I’m like. My hair, my personality. The way I look when I genuinely smile. All I can do is hope. Hope that we’re right. Hope that you try not to judge Or assume before you get a chance To form a real opinion. So: infer if you wish. Build a picture of me in your head and fantasize about me. But it’s not my fault when your walls crumble and fall, shaken by the reality that is ME. Because I am me. Not you. Not a picture in your head. MYSELF. Nicely done! I like it, especially the way you did your line spacing. And the idea of it, what do we really know about someone before we meet them and what is the extent of our assumptions. Cool stuff! 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Condensation Posted October 30, 2020 Report Share Posted October 30, 2020 14 hours ago, Scout_Fox said: Nicely done! I like it, especially the way you did your line spacing. And the idea of it, what do we really know about someone before we meet them and what is the extent of our assumptions. Cool stuff! Why thanks! It's not Shakespeare, but I liked it too. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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