Robinski Posted September 19, 2020 Report Share Posted September 19, 2020 On 11/08/2020 at 10:49 PM, Turin Turambar said: Never. It was a random convenient substance on hand to use. She's never summoned a demon before! I took the impression that she did it all the time, because she had the powder, and knew exactly what to do. On 17/08/2020 at 2:22 AM, Turin Turambar said: She's an anthropologist who discovered demons are real and is writing a book on them. I got none of that. We really need to know this on the first page, because it's N's whole motivation for doing what she's doing. On 17/08/2020 at 0:40 PM, Turin Turambar said: I'm prude enough to dislike cursing, even in writing. So just imagine it for the time being. So, how are you going to write it when the time comes? On 18/08/2020 at 2:38 AM, Snakenaps said: On 18/08/2020 at 0:38 AM, Turin Turambar said: I totally want all of my comments to be LotR memes from now on. Is that a dare? And yes, I agree this is totally an improvement on the first version. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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